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[33] Stable NZT-48 Research II

🕑 Added 2024-07-05 16:38:01 +0000 UTC

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Cali20

Tell me more about what's worth improving... and explain how the hero is an uncultured idiot.

Ruzzzy

Honestly, I think it’s worth improving and bringing to the same style the way the hero speaks and thinks in his thoughts, in the first chapters this was normal, then it got worse and worse, and in this one he’s generally like an uncultured idiot..


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