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Old Art | Storybook Concept - "Lorelai And the Pearl"
🕑 Added 2023-04-22 01:39:04 +0000 UTCI just finished Dogs in Love, so I'm going to spend today doing a little spring cleaning of my computer before I finally install my new one.
This is another old, crappy storybook I made when I was like 15 for some high school class. This is the first character I created named Lorelai (there are three of them, I really like that name).
I don't have much to say about this one, but if post-college me could meet pre-college me and give notes on this graphic design he would shoot him in the face for that typography on page 10. Yikes.
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JelloApocalypse
Here's a picture of her as drawn by the same artist who did the flashback stuff in Dogs in Love 2 - https://i.imgur.com/KWq9UQA.png
Koispeck
No joke I have an assignment where we have to make a childrenโs book about ectoderms for my marine science class, I feel like I would have fun if she didnโt deadass give us a week to finish the entire thing. Also these pages are actually really nicely rendered especially for a highschool project!
Flare TheGunCalamity
lorelei is a great name. have you ever heard the original poem by Heinrich heine?
Green Pikmin
I love the line "Yarharhar! I sure got you!" to bits shgfsfds
Happy
The question now is who's Lorelei number 2?
Al-Amin Ali
Still leagues better than anything I ever made in high school ๐
Markisgay
God itโs very high school but so cute.
Folkloric
You wrote oyster three times in the same sentence on page one... if that isn't indicative of high schooler prose I don't know what is.
