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PW Chapter 101: As Water Flows, So Too Does Time

🕑 Added 2025-09-08 23:04:15 +0000 UTC

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Drat. Edited!

prentice barry

the time skip to here seems well placed and spaced, not so overly long that we feel we have missed some important or more interesting stuff, also positioned well so that if feels like moving on to a new season of a show and jumping right into the good stuff after the previous season ended at a good spot for a break to occur the upgrades they have picked up in the between feel like a good set to be working their way up with, they also help to flesh out the background world building and fundamentals of the universe of the story, astrids enchantments for her boots, the chameleon-esque armor for muti and felix's under armor all feel suitably fantastical and yet grounded at the same time

1v1 Me, No Items, Fox only, Final Destination

"However, given that the Dungeon went to seven floors, Ash was sure that the Boss floor would be absolutely precipitous." Ash should be Astrid.


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