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PW Chapter 108: Making Decisions

🕑 Added 2025-09-18 00:20:32 +0000 UTC

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No_Creative_Name

I hope it hasn't come across as if she'd have gotten only Common options at evolution. This is just a way for her to get better options. There's only going to be a couple of chapters for the party to get towards the Trials, too, because I'm compensating for how long it's been in Bronze, haha. The Trials are going to deal with a couple issues that've existed in the books so far, so I'm wanting to get there sooner rather than later.

Marius K

A little bit unsatisfactory, I get why in universe Astrid would choose this but this is a dissonance between reader and protagonist. Without this boon, would she have gotten a weak class? Definitely not, since you wouldn’t stop this story in 2 months because the protagonist got a bad class and had to stop delving. :D We already now that she is going to be a pinnacle warrior ^^ , so good classes are basically guaranteed. Yeah, in universe it’s the best choice but it feels like she got nothing ( or did you have two entirely different story paths planned for her getting a weak class? ) But this is just some rambling, the story is pretty great or I wouldn’t be so passionate about it :D .

Gilded Goblin

Extraordinary Iron Class here we come baby


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