Chap 16 Early Pages - PG29
🕑 Added 2024-10-13 02:31:37 +0000 UTCInteresting folks indeed!
Another page tomorrow!
(Thanks so much for all the comments on the previous pages.)
Comments
Emily Rochester
Gayley? Sully, my son, you're not even trying. 😆
Pidge
I keep getting whiplash from the ucla/westwood name drops 😭 I live close + used to work there and it feels so weird to read about in fiction!! imagining it in the 70s makes it more fun :^)
Nekochan
I just realized if you look closely you can see Sulvain’s handwriting in the notebook 😮
Meli
so at least six more people to meet in this party ? (based on the shadows.. will we encounter them all ? we shall see)
Livi
Oh geez yeah he's gotta be OLD. I wonder what age he died at... 😦 I wonder how much she knows too. Glad he's finally going to school though. Never too late haha
Missiek43
Brilliant observations!!! I would not have caught that!! 😍
Missiek43
I wonder, does Mar know that he just *looks* like he's 20 something? How old would he be now?? Over 500?!
Neko-san
I love Mar's design so much, she's so pretty!! But they're all very cute. Every page in this chapter still has me in awe seeing these characters in more modern designs. I can't wait to meet Raz, too!
thedistortedeye
They’re all so pretty
Meli
We could see a butterfly pattern on the back of their head on a previous page, but I never would've guessed that from their name ! Nice catch ✨
Livi
Freshmen 🥹🥹🥹 so cute
OdacioChoco
Off topic but the character design is *muah* exquisite. 🤌
Iselin
Mittrei is another butterfly name like... Sesam...maybe he is a Morgana too. I am a bit confused by the party, all these people have magical abilities or just the thematic of the party is occultism..
Iselin
I noticed it too, and the other two didn't introduced themselves, but were presented by Arrow
Fond Phantom
i see sulvain’s notebook but i also peep at another notebook in ilise’s (or mittrei’s?) hand 🫵👀 inch resting……..
Nekochan
Nothingggggg nothing illegal 👀
Ty Waldrop
I always get so excited for every single page. This story and these characters are just so unique and your art has such a specific pov. Can't wait for more! 🤩
Missiek43
Oh they all look so cool! I can't wait to get to know them!! (Mar is such a cute nickname!) The attention to detail!! I just had to confirm and of course Gayley Court is a real place near UCLA!
Sang Steppenwolf
Sweet baby is socializing! Good on you, Sul! Hopefully these new folks will treat him well. <3 Still convinced Sul might run into Raz in this chapter, maybe even at this party. I miss my bois being together.
Em
Ooooh right by the cemetery. What are getting up to in that part of town, Sulvain?? 😂
Nekochan
Return of the notebook! ✨✨✨