Early Pages - Chap 11 PG105
🕑 Added 2022-03-04 05:19:44 +0000 UTCBack to Raziol... in the gardens....
Thanks so much for all your lovely comments on the last few posts! We really love reading your thoughts! I'm slowly getting back to everyone, thanks so much for being such awesome people ππ
Comments
KaiJu
Yup yup π₯Ίβ€οΈ It's such a deep wound for Raz, it'll take a while for him to feel differently... ;_;
Mildred
Raz has such a terror of rejection, it's so hard to watch! I hope he can get past this, when he realises Sulvain is never going to leave him <3
KaiJu
Waaaah thank you so much Panther!! π₯Ίπππ Ahhh you have such good insight for these characters!
PantherLion
He's so scared of everyone leaving him, and that's exactly how Sulvain felt, as well, when Raz almost fell out of that window @m@ Crossing my fingers that Sulvain's earlier save will keep him safe for even a moment longer so that Sulvain can get to him in time and maybe save Huygens in the process @m@ Kaiju, y'all are beasts at this pov switching and the pacing, I'm about to fall off of my chair I'm on the /very/ edge of my chair with these events >m<π¦π Also, I really like that you've added so much space to each panel to really emphasize the loneliness Raziol feels in this page, really well done πͺπΌβ¨