Sarah Hawke
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Dark Covenant - Patreon Early Release
🕑 Added 2024-06-24 17:32:47 +0000 UTCHey, guys! So here is the rest of the book. Despite me thinking this would be shorter than the others, it ended up as the longest book I've written, clocking in slightly longer than Insurrection. Because I am an idiot.
As always, please put typos in comments here, in a private message, or (best) in the #corrections channel in Discord.
Edit: 9 removed for coming Catalyst release. You can get the book by pledging at a higher tier or by checking it out on Amazon here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0D6DKSKL6/
Comments
James Garrett
You are truly amazing with how fast and well you write. I am loving this series and have to admit I will not be able to help with the typos because I have listened to the first two books on Audible and am definitely waiting for Dark Covenant in Audible. It's so good! Yours were the first two books I downloaded on Audible and everything else I've downloaded has failed to compare (I even just punted someone else's book in the middle of listening to it because it was awful). You're the best and can't wait for the Audible version!
Sarah Hawke
thanks!
Ally
Another possible. P400. ‘I seem you recall you promising…’ . I think it’s ‘I seem TO recall you promising…’
Sarah Hawke
Good catch!
Ally
Loving it. Possible typo. (Sorry if I’m unclear with the page number). P271. ‘Keep the demon’s intention’. It kinda works, but I assumed it was meant to be ‘attention’.
Sarah Hawke
That vernacular is a good point. But I'll add this stuff to my notes as I do a final read-through here for smaller fixes
Uppercase
This isn't so much of a typo, as a couple of on-going issues (and I admit, bringing them up in book 3 is a little late), but the verb for using a bow and arrow is "loose" not "fire". As in "Zae loosed her last arrow". Shoot is also good, but fire derives from gunpowder weapons. MAYBE if "fire" was the command used for the magic weapons before the Invocation, it might have lingered in the vernacular, the same way we can imagine the same thing happening if the real world had a post-apocalyptic scenario and lost the ability to make guns, and kept the term when using bows and crossbows. Also, the honorific "Sir" for a knight goes with their first name, not their last. Sir Ian McKellan is "Sir Ian" not "Sir McKellan." Ser Jaime Lannister is "Ser Jaime" not "Ser Lannister." So Duncan should be "Sir Duncan Keene" or "Sir Duncan," not "Sir Keene". I am enjoying the book too much to pay attention for real typos, sorry.
