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CRUSH3D!! Storyboards TAPE 8-10

🕑 Added 2024-06-06 23:26:50 +0000 UTC

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But she does NOT gossip about Carter eventually. The chapter is supposed to end on the note, that we know the secret is save with her for now. Reuben reminds her that all their friends are untrustworthy, so she throws any plans aside anyway to talk to any of them. She considered talking to Reuben about it, cause she knows he would not tell anyone and seems to care about Carter’s issues, but when he says he doesn’t wanna know, she does not even go into any detail. So I know what you mean in terms of regressing in her morals, but its meant to be more like going from ”in this situation talking about Carter should be fine“ but then remembering that ”yeah, right, wouldn’t feel great doing“. As it’s far from the final text version, I will try to make this more clear later. I wanted to set up a little thing that phanda COULD potentially use to hold over carter’s head, (and that his ”leaving the door open“ tendency actually HAS a little payoff, of someone overhearing (but not during the scene everyone expected it 😂) but at this point (like when he’s not trying to fuck her boyfriend) phanda has no reason to use against him. It’s supposed to be a little tension of wondering, if she would fall into the category ”jealous ex girlfriend, turning into toxic gossip bitch“ or if she can actually be helpful to the MC. I hope I explained that coherently, cause I take your problem with the scene seriously, cause it’s really not how I want it to be read.