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CRUMBLES 01 (nsfw)
🕑 Added 2024-08-11 00:35:06 +0000 UTC
You will find the actual content as a download below!
CONTEXT:
We're way later in the story. Carter and Scott share a hotel room. (This happens often, cause the team often stays overnight at the away game places). They pushed their beds together cause they already have a history of (not romantic) sexual contact, that increased in intensity over some time (How it started is for another time). So far, they never kissed, and the contact was always "one-directional". This means Scott "watched" or "helped" but wouldn't let Carter touch him or even undress. Several reasons (and hypocrisy, lol)
Now, the first time, things go a bit differently.
What is CRUSH3D!! CRUMBLES?
Tl;dr/short:
"crumbles" is my scene planning scrapbook (in storyboard form); only that you can already see it!
long:
Crumbles was a spontaneous idea, cause I realized something:
In good hyperfocus phases, I can spit out several pages of rough storyboards kinda quickly. This is what is the most fun and important to me when making comics, and I even think that the context and setting of a scene can make smut as hot as great anatomy ... (maybe??)
Anyway, it generally frustrates me that I feel like not getting to my ideas for scenes of the comic because rendering of the final pages takes me soooo long. And then I end up forgetting them, cause I don't WANT to write them down differently than in storyboard form.
So I thought, I will do something that has none of the stuff that makes it paralyzing to me: no lettering, no backgrounds, no good artwork, no formatting, etc, haha. But I still hope I can make it readable enough for you guys to be able to tell what's going on!
Also, what takes the most planning and time is obviously the establishing of the scene and the way to getting there through hundreds of other pages, and looking out for the exact right time for a scene.
With crumbles I skip all of the "hard parts" as they will simply come like ... random crumbles, eventually forming the outline of a big cake.
But not in the right order yet, not complete, but they will serve to me as notes. Whenever I have an idea about scenes that are still far away in the comic. Or might never happen.
And because they have no built-up, things will obviously be confusing to you, but I will give a tiny bit of context (like above) before every crumble episode. Also, chances are high that I myself don't know where the fuck scenes are supposed to go and am figuring shit out as I go, lmao. So, hopefully, not all of that work is for nothing, and the storyboards can actually be used in some way for later.
Comments
Gwyn
Love this So much
Katy Olly
Love this extra!! Thanks for sharing! We’re always cheering you and the boys on! I hope things have been improving and you are doing well. Best wishes always!!
Susanna Lavea
I love these pages also in this form! I saw other artists having a comic made with a simpler more "storyboard like" style for the reasons you describe, that allowed them to keep enjoying doing the comic without burning out. It's quite hard to keep such high quality as your comic without having proper editorial support. So I hope you find your balance, there's high quality in your characters and that shows even in this more sketched version. I love it, thanks for sharing them !
Tom G
😄
Yaa
Omg yeah, I meant crumbs 😂😂😂 maybe I’ll rename that later….
LoKaShi
Honestly I love seeing storyboards! It's always the most exciting thing to me when Kasu shows me the page storyboards they made with my scripts! And seeing yours is also very exciting! Yeah the finished stuff is nice too, but I know how taxing it can be. So all I want to say is... very nice stuff, excited for more 😏
Tom G
Wow! Just one thing: do you maybe mean crumbs instead of "crumbles"?
Yaa
I think this time they come at the same time!! Carter from already being close and Scott from coming super quickly and being overwhelmed from his own uncontrollably stronger getting thrusts 🫣. And after that experience, Scott is really really really crushing on Carter.
Natalie
Wow! Omg that is done so well. I love Scott slowly getting hi self closer to what he wants. The forbidden sex thing is so exciting to read!
Lethal Butterfly
🤩
Peak
I really pray you keep this storyboard as it is in final work cause its so perfect(and hot)..<3 As for why he won't take his clothes off/be touched I assume its body dysmorphia, I used to suffer from it it severely as well and tended to avoid sex for that reason. Tho its prob some religious reason as well, cause IIRC masturbation is condemned in Christianity, right? I am kinda curious tho, which one of them came first from dry humping, or was it at the same time? 😈 XD Regardless, I can't wait to read more storyboard content in the future
Louie
it's cool to see some time jumps
Yaa
not yet XD (but Scott's penis is very big) that is my only reference so far haha
jmatiasdh
miss YAA do you have a chart of their sizes??
Jessica
Thank you SO MUCH for posting and sharing your storyboards!!! It’s so cool to watch your creative process all the way through 💗 I read through every one, and every time I remember how much I love your work💗💗
