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Chapter 1,224.

🕑 Added 2024-03-21 20:49:27 +0000 UTC

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David Ballantyne

Zac had a mind's eye agate, not cat's eye.

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

R. Maxwell Steele

I haven't read the next chapter by I'm betting the stick is to bring the ship down and ensure mutual destruction.

Josh

Book 10 chapter 21 the shipyard guys talking about installing it. Damn just heard while listening to audio book again.

Michael Fannon

Later apparently

JDemo

Wahhhhh!! Listen to me, I’m complaaaaaiiiiinnnning!!

Joey

So is the chapter going to be on the early side today?

Zachary Blevins

The twilight story ark I really liked I like the million gates story ark, especially the end of it when iz showed up The last story ark that took place in the ancient fortress, and you had technocrats maneuvering his army to show up at a different place than it was supposed to and three or four different people showing up from nowhere. Yeah, it got overly convoluted. I really enjoy the undead empire until like the last 150 chapters You cannot like a story ark that last 200 chapters in what will probably be a three or 4000 chapter series But I’ve learnt my lesson in the future I’ll try not to criticize anything about a book series without y’all breaking your hearts ❤️ From now on yes, your blue eyes are pretty yes, that outfit makes you look good no, it doesn’t make you look fat at all I promise to never again say anything negative about any of the chapters, regardless of how convoluted or stupid they get I promise

Rid

If that’s how you feel… leave? Literally no one is trying to stop you. There’s constructive criticism and there’s just being an ass. Also, your gripes sound like you just don’t like character/story development that’s not focused on murder hobo tendencies 😂

Zachary Blevins

There are plenty of books that have political intrigue in them This particular book series has a backstory that goes back millions of years i’ve only ever read a few book series that bothers to go back that far But the last 400 chapters of this book series or so has More drama and needless suspense then the first 700 tap or so stories change as they go I think I enjoyed the story arcs before the perennial vastness, not so much after it and another hundred 150 chapters might pass, and I might start enjoying the story some again. Or maybe I’ll take a break for six months and come back

Michael

To each their own I guess. I think it would be a boring story if there weren’t side plots and information dump chapters. If you just want something that has no depth and is just 100% action then maybe this isn’t the series for you.

Chris

I got kicked after saying more or less the same thing - just a cliff hanger with the final Novermore scores that got dragged for like multiple chapters. Adding information that was unnecessary, uncalled for, irrelevant and a waste of paying subscribers time. I reckon a cliffhanger is good, at the right time. But I don't want to be sitting on the edge of a cliff for a week without it being a good cause - I.e. wrapping up loose ends before the main plot point resolves. Like this referencing the scanner that was mentioned back in the day with the Iliex. Pretty happy to be here though, Kator is an interesting character.

Lex Luther S

Well, obviously, there's gonna be intrigue and politics. These are ancient billion years old factions, so of course there will be struggle and divides only to see new alliances etc etc. Besides, kator has laid all but 1 to 2 cards on the table and those last 2 cards are likely aces to survive and as stated, zac can not do anything given the primos write has not been broken. Besides, he's not in the best shape to fight the skeletal lawyer anyway and it's important to note that kator is bound by the write too. He can't do anything that would jeopardize the mission least the heavens turn on him leaving him a fish on the chopping block. So while he's greedy, shifty and shaddy as hell, he can't attack zac with the objective to kill or cripple him or endanger the mission.

Zachary Blevins

Zogarth What’s going on in the primal hunter series? Haven’t done anything since like chapter 809 been waiting for my son to catch up I think he’s still down in the 600s or so he gets annoyed when I get too far ahead of him and one of our mutual book series

Zachary Blevins

I’ve dropped book series that I was 10 or 12 or 15 books in before I like action and adventure Not needless, drama or false suspense or overly convoluted plot points I’ve walked away from book series before, and I’ll do it again Jim Butcher Dresden files After like book 13 John Ringo one of his book series after book 5 or six Starship mage series after the author, switched main characters or started to David Webber on her Harrington series after book 12 even the safehold books after book 6 I think I’ll still say their great authors really enjoyed some of their books. I have still even recommended people to read those books series after I walked away from them.

Jeff McCulley

Actually, I find it excellent writing, in that what you geniuses think is “obvious” isn’t what it actually is. Especially when TFD keeps doing it right there in front of your face, and you all are completely oblivious. But go ahead. Take off. I’m done trying to explain to the complainers what’s really going on. Lemmings over the cliff. Some of you need a Zogarth lesson.

Jeff McCulley

Hilarious that you think he’s a “treacherous snake”. Complex, yes, but that’s how he’s intentionally written. As Ogras was at the start, motivated solely by self interest. Still, I’m not complaining when someone who thinks they know better than the author leaves. Just like Zogarth just gave a lesson in etiquette. Don’t let the door hit your butt on the way out.

Zachary Blevins

Here we go, get another convoluted plot, point to keep this character who’s clearly a treacherous, backstabbing snake along with them the style of riding exist only to create needless drama. This was an action adventure in the first few books it turns into more more of a soap opera I’m gonna give up on it.

Zachary Blevins

Yeah, the beginning of an overly convoluted plot line They take away from the story for me not add to it

Scott Mingo

He's an opportunist. Whatever helps him the most, whether it's assisting Zac or backstabbing him, that's what he'll do.

Samatar

The bully thing was a front lol.

Samatar

TBH I like it. He's got that early Ogras frenemy vibe going that Zac has to team up with but always needs to be on guard for the possibiltiy of backstabbing.

Thenais

just irritating imho

Thenais

new theory : Kator is a tsundere

John Smith

This chapter almost feels like a reaction to the confusion many had to the last one. It's a little disappointing so many words were used to spell out the obvious

Darion

Oh I don't know maybe because every chance he's gotten, he's been antagonistic? Him being forced to do so is understandable not acceptable.

Kharas

The end points insinuates that Kator will attack Zac in some way, but I simply dont believe he will do that. First of all, Kator is written to be supremely self-interested and smart with alot of insight. A person like that should know that trying to or even succeeding in beating up Zac will have the opposite effect of improving his chances of joining up. Beside that, there is the Primos writ we have multiple times been told are still in effect, so even if Kator did attack Zac, he would face the backlash from the deal while being on an enemy ship, full of powerful enemies, and Zacs other half. I think that Kator is simply showing Zac how strong he is, and how much of a difference he can therefore do for Zac in the upcoming fights. But we will see in 16 hours or so ;)

Danny

Ah man what is kator talking about now what carrot he just explain his situation and thats the carrot dam he needs the Stick hard and fast...

M S

I personally don’t think Kator is a villain or an ally he is too wishy washy to be either. In the end that will make him a dispensable character to kill off.

Douglas Davis

No, he's a mean obnoxious bully and should die painfully.

Douglas Davis

Frankly I hope Kator dies messily and painfully. He's an obnoxious bully.

Douglas Davis

Huh? Ogras has never been a bully and asshole to Zac. And Ogras is funny, Kator is just mean.

Shurjin

Welcome to Straw Hat group Kator lol. We need Ogras #2

Michael

I don’t get why everyone is treating Kator like he’s been a villain. He hasn’t really done anything to Zac. The only reason he was a jerk was because he was literally ordered by B/A grades to sow fell karma. He’s clearly going to be interested in joining the empire.

Jonas Lemke

The writing for Kator is extremely well done IMO. He is both irritating and unpredictable. He is also very capable and dangerous. We know his motivation is self serving but not what shape it will take. Much like Joffrey in GoT, he's written to be disliked and he fills that role very well. He can either be a valuable ally, or a dangerous enemy and he walks the edge of being both at the same time.

James Faulkner

More like the big bone 😏

kiwi

Lesgo! I did say from the beginning that I kinda like the idea of Kator as an ally.

FriendorFo

I unga, therefore I bunga

Salvo

This whole narrative on ‘Kator is an ally’ requires knowledge of the spy sensor. Kator has never been on or seen the yephelion interior til today. The plan to lure the bell was a mutual plan laid out over a year. So the white sky phalanx autarchs decided to be here long before knowledge of the sensor. The chain of events was to ride the bell in and harvest Zac’s cycle. Kator was a facade of an alliance. Chicken bone broth noped out of helping after the bell got here. He only Infiltrated and Cloaked inside the ship. Then Zac broke his team free. He’s reaching for ANY good p.r. “Oh, Zac you’re alive?!? Umm, is this black mold in your janitor closet? See I saved your whole team didn’t I.”

Darnell Maxwell

The plan is to kidnap Zac post Ultom. Kator's guardian will be there when the Ultom trial ends to pick him up and take him home.

Jeff McCulley

Seriously? What does “two hours to glimpse the ship” have to do with anything?

Jeff McCulley

I assume chapter, since he didn’t confirm the “maybe” editing day today.

Jeff McCulley

Kator’s Dao Guardian is nowhere near.

Jeff McCulley

I’m not sure that’s what he’s “about to do”. TFD love his misdirection. Especially with Kator.

Berry McCockiner

Good soup

Jeff McCulley

I wonder if maybe he’s going to offer to BE the stick?

Jeff McCulley

Uhhhh…what?

John Anastacio

Malakai - so wrong but I love it.

Malakal

That sounds all kinds of wrong

Addison Grimes

Still hating Kator… even if he seems to have turned over a new leaf

Eternal Scholar

Same here, if power is the only thing he needs, he is better putting his eggs on zac’s basket.

Minh Nguyen

Is there a chapter tomorrow or is it an editing day?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Salvo

Bone broth seems to think himself the hero AFTER his faction hitched a ride on Zac’s bell. This was his first glimpse of the ship. They had maybe 2 hours for the ship to unfold and power up. Sorry, into the soup you go. A real ally would destroy their cultivation to be a Dao guard.

Telewyn

Didn’t he ask about it when he was summoned to meet A’Zu and Be’Zi just a couple chapters ago? They told him it was a special time inlet. But otherwise it’s a problem for him.

liquid_helix

Who doesn’t like waiting for a big stick over the weekend.

BelligerentGnu

He thinks *that* was a carrot?

Timothy Dana

In addition to whom?

Erik Halberg

Hot take: I'm kinda coming around on the idea of General Kator of the Atwood Empire

PapaJohn

if you're talking about the 'chronal sequelae' or wtvr from using so many time chambers before breaking through to Hegemony, then it shouldn't be a problem anymore. All that was washed away when he fought the laws during his breakthrough into middle Hegemony.

Joey

Probably something this arc from the Limitless Empire or Templar

Joey

So Zac can screw with the Creators by saying Iz was onboard to extort them?

Salvo

The stick is Kator spies that landed on earth. First was the undead weapon inspectors, knowledge of a sensor on the ship means he’s familiar with this subtle design. Now the Kator physically landed on earth he probably activated something.

Jeff McCulley

I dunno about “nasty”. All he really has to do is order Zac to take him along. That whole scene at the end reads “TFD misdirection” to me. Thank goodness he’s not using Friday for editing, right? Amiright?!!

Jeff McCulley

Jake now has a reason to accept that invitation and go visit the Fourth Mountain. Just a matter of trust…which will likely be determined when he runs into the next batch of Sangha wandering his way.

Will Mill

Twenty-sixth

Jeff McCulley

You haven’t seen what he’s calling a “stick” yet. Might be good not to jump to conclusions. TFD tends to like misdirection.

DrSubterfuge

Love's Bond is his Death attuned Regalia. It's just incomplete until peak D and we rarely hear the armor part called out.

Matthew Hay

It's definitely Mind's Eye Agate, all over book 9.

ByLordMatsLuck

This is some good drama

Matthew Hay

I think the theory is he will craft his own w/ his Void Smithing skill once it improves another tier or so. Anything he can craft himself would be superior to something he can find, but he still needs some improvement. For his Undead side, Alea seems to think she'll be strong enough to be a weapon, armament, and regalia.

Thenais

time for iz to come and deep fry this little piss of shit

Darnell Maxwell

Regalia is rare in the frontier and because of the war he hasn't been able to leave and go buy one. Defense is also his second highest stat. So finding one that will actually do anything for him is gonna be a major pain. He's always had this issue, everytime he finds a piece of defensive gear, he outlevels the damn thing by the time the arc ends.

SmokeJam

Throughout the story I always got agitated when people tried to order Zac around or stick him in a certain position as Kator is about to do I suppose. I know he is not inherently evil, he even did Zac a solid here, but I actually hope he fucks up somewhere down the line and receives some payback for all his arrogant and obnoxious behaviour, which doesn't fit a grunt soldier he claims to be at all.

Spaghetti And Meatballs

I want to see Zac use creation or oblivion enrrgy to change/destroy a couple of those Miracle bones Kator is so reliant on

Darnell Maxwell

I love how Kator thinks telling Zac about a broken tracker after it was used to ambush him, his half assed theories of who wants to kill Zac and telling Zac about his orders to kidnap Zac post Ultom counts as a carrot. What the fuck do you consider a stick? Also shit like this is why I call the Undead Empire stupid. At this point multiple Autarchs have tried to capture Zac. He escaped from the Ourom, Iz Tayn's uncle, the time draugr lady by accident, and just escaped 4 more from the Sangha plus the Undead Empire. If none of them managed to do it. And the ones that came the closest always seem to walk away crippled. Why the fuck do you think Kator and his dao guardian will be able to succeed? How arrogant do you have to be to go through all of this and think sending weaker soldiers will somehow get the job done? STOP TRYING TO KIDNAP ZAC! IT DOESN'T WORK!

MacMahon Wenzl

Will Zac ever get a Regalia? I'm pretty sure he doesn't have one. So why doesn't he have something of the sort?

Themo Grulld

Kator is maybe pretty bad ,but reliable bad .So a lesser concern?

Swaggernaut77

Idc what people may think I love Kator. He gives me undead Ogras vibes.

Telewyn

Zac’s main personal vulnerability at this moment might be his time stream, it was mentioned recently, and Kator seems to have some expertise in that area.

Darnell Maxwell

Everytime I think Kator is smart he does some dumb shit like this. You just saw this man cripple 4 autarchs while in D Grade. What makes you think you can threaten him and come out the other side better.

Mike

first to say TFTC

StuBee3

TFTC 😎

Omiso

Rest in Peace Lucky Beads you were wrongfully implicated by the Sangha in a ploy to abduct Zac but it was a tracker of the Pryer they were following, still your sacrifice allowed Zac to lure the Eclipses Bell faster and spare him from losing his hair becoming a monk, for that and the many services you gave him you will be remembered (o.o)7

Lucas Gulick

Ah that's right, Kator is the mission leader. I bet we got some nasty orders coming

Andrew

Thank you!

Darnell Maxwell

Did TFD misspell Mind's Eye Agate or did I skip a chapter where Zac found out its actually called a Cat's Eye Agate?

Eskil

every time i start liking kator, he shows me why i don't

Mike Patterson

Need. To. See. The. New. Stats.

trufflezz

This guy is just lame, like kator just feels boring as a character. Just there as extra tension and the whole "mysterious" act is annoying, we get that enough now this dude is doing it too

FriendorFo

I bet Zac’s “stick” is pretty big, ya know, with all that creation energy he can use at will

Edeh

Fifth

Thenais

:p

Lucas Gulick

Third

Jared

Second

Michael Fannon

First


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