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Chapter 1,404v2.

🕑 Added 2025-09-16 19:39:42 +0000 UTC

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Ledski

Feels unfair twisting his arm like that. Zac was already acting in the interest of the Empire and they withold help unless he agrees to a blank check? And he actually accepts? Makes no sense.

Edgar Segura

His siblings like the other enkindling sages

Edgar Segura

He's going to be running around doing the bidding of the chalice or Empire after this arc because of the words he said and his conviction.

Edgar Segura

Does it mean literal resurrection? I feel like it might. Huge waves are going to rock the multiverse

Edgar Segura

That was suspenseful asf

Emmanuel Achaab

This is becoming headache inducing. Too many threads and everyone wants to take a chunk out of Zac’s fate. Kenzie, Thea, his mom, the techos, the primo, the tayn’s, the draugr, the reavers, the monks, Mox, the Chalice, sendor. So many chapters, so many threads, so damn confusing. I guess I just want to see some progress. How long can we keep hopping around meeting people who make this whole arc even more convoluted. There’s only so much space one story can take up

Jeff McCulley

Stray thought. I feel a bit more comfortable connecting the “Omnipresence Chamber” to the “Omnilord’s Castle” than I ever did the Omnitool. Pops in and out of places all over the Multiverse? That’s what both previous Pillars and the Centurion fortress did. And doesn’t seem unlike the Mercurial Court.

Ondrej Vicherek

Frankly it felt like it was finally moving. Enjoyed a chapter for the first time after sone break and now it is rewritten :\

SandreX

Well yes and no :D Trinity Zac is highly possible if he creates spirit body of conflict (Not sure if it will be corporeal). And based on trend either his last opponent or wife will be Iz. Because she has similar path of daos.

Chris

Also, if you're going to have 400 characters you should probably not wait so long to do POV's on interesting characters like Thea...like I'm not sure where the idea came for having a POV of a nobody like Emily before doing something for Thea... Like Janos is cool and it makes sense with the mercurial theme and his goal...but that's the whole point...we know his goal so we can understand.... You know what.... maybe we should get 20 chapters on Brazla's POV. Like I get it but to have zero external POV's is really isolating.... like should I care about Zecia or not? who knows?

Chris

Okay so I'm a big fan but my man wtf is going on.... like there is no plot...no goal....no nothing. You can say as much as you want but beyond...primo wants this and the toad wants that, and Valari needs this there is no purpose. Yeah, yeah, I understand there is a background but how many hundreds of chapters until we have an understanding. Like this has been in the works for a while and a giant accumulation or w/e but literally nobody has any context to what this means. I'm sure Lex will jump in and plaster everything very logically but really 90% of these 'young masters' we have no idea why there here besides 'seize fate'. TBH you should ignore the invisible to rivers of time bs and give use some POV of the Supremacies and their opinions on what's happening. Or at the very least some reactions from them about the changes.... like there is no outward context to anything. I just don't get the wall...you literally explain nothing beyond 'seize fate'...like why tf would an imperial need to seize fate to become a higher grade...like maybe he wants to usurp of the thrones or something??? Like maybe I missed a few chapters about this but how tf would that work? Maybe I just like to understand my enemies but how do any of the 'young masters' change anything from winning? Not being a dick but we know nothing about anything...'change the era' cool...cool... what does that even affect? Right now, it's like children fighting for a throne because it looks pretty. Like some of the side quest arcs are cool but really none of it makes sense without any goal. All of this might become interesting but really without knowing the point it's kind of like "who cares if he stops the corruption".... zero investment

Sirloki

Oh boy, last time Zac got a bump on the ole noggin he ended up with a twin brother. Could this be the start of triplets? Can the universe survive more Zac?! Does he have enough waifus lined up??

Mike Ockslonge

Jeff, this is definitely stretching it I feel, it seems like the bare bones answer is that xiphos is screwed because he is a templar in general which ties him to the imperial destiny too tightly to unwind. I think that there is probably some sort of symbolism of the three stars and it might involve the Templar orders but remember the chalice was separate from the stars. If I had to guess the simple answer is that the three stars are symbols of the empires path like a personal insignia. Maybe he had three daos? I would be pretty interested to get a set of chapters about side characters soon though

Mike Ockslonge

Imagine Zach goes to inspect the gate insides to see how well it got repaired and August is in there hanging out 😭 Good point on the statues… time stuff must be such a pain in the ass to write do you feel like this has plot affects or is mostly just a happenstance thing? I feel like the halo thing must be weighted differently once you’re inside a court? I mean there’s no way that this island is the main problem that affected a whole court there has to be hundreds of similar things that happened and there’s only nine halos per pillar. Idk this arcs overall pacing seems a little strange but it’s also my first time reading it as a serial. It definitely seems like the story could be slowed down dramatically because of the breadth of the possibilities in the trial and it’s super fast because it wouldn’t be very fun to read as a serial if the trial took 10 years to complete.

Booksaregood

Nahhh everything’s perfect.

Stephen Taylor

The text states clearly that he got hit by the FMG…it was vibrating so hard it flew out of his hand….

Mike Ockslonge

General comment on the cultivation system here.. I feel like it’s under explored how much symbolism plays a role in how well things like skills work. Maybe it’s a little bit over excavating and the simple answer is that it’s cool writing or maybe that the symbolism comes the other direction but I feel like it opens up some cool ideas. Basically skills like arbiter of the abyss or whatever the current name is make you look like the grim reaper because the symbolism makes the dao and energy work better. This gives a good reason for spells to be super dope looking and it also opens the doors wider for stuff like ritual magic. I think it would be pretty sweet to find some small sect somewhere that does giant communal spells with like a big ritual dance circle and occult symbolism or sacrifices or to discover that this kind of ritual magic is how heart curses are made by the kantanu where arrays help with the process but the symbolism of such and such thing makes it actually all work.

Jeff McCulley

Last crazy thought for the moment. I think it would be pretty cool if, instead of August giving up when Zac shouted “Piss off!”, that he was instead sucked into the Fuxi Mountain Gate. And it’s currently digesting him. Much as might have happened with the Brush. Remember it’s “horror” when he started to stick it in? Also, as far as the FMG…the Gate inside was surrounded by the statues of the heads of the respective Courts. Except that was before Grand Dream got revised into the spot, so that would be whoever held the job before him, outside the dreams. Lastly…did Zac just earn another Halo on the Pillar?

Jeff McCulley

I was puzzling over the bump on Zac’s head, especially after the revised chapter—where he says that after half a day, there should be no bump. Lamplighting.. I tried to put all the pieces together, what odd thing happened so that came about. Then it struck me. The blatantly obvious answer. Someone just hit Zac in the head. Oh. With Esmerelda sitting there, innocently complaining that there isn’t a single coin in the whole place. Well, she’s not lying, if she already snagged everything, right? Right? Hello?

Jeff McCulley

Xiphos talked about his karma being tied to closely to the Empire. I’ll try to make this short. What if those three stars Zac saw at the top of the formation a couple of chapters ago dormant represent people—but the Thrones Laondio had accumulated? We know that the Empyrean Throne would have been one of them. Which the Empyrean Chalice is apparently tied to, or a part of. Which would mean that his entire Order is too closely tied to the Empire for the “taboo” by the Heavens. Which then would offer the question what the other two Thrones might be, and which Orders are associated with them—but I think we can guess at least one. The one Emily met in the Radiant Court. And remember, that Court is the home for the Templar Council—if I’m recalling the name correctly. Like that’s not going to come into play…

John

I like to think that Zacs future grade breakthroughs will go down in a similar way to the Eveningtide Asuras. He's the Chaos cultivator so it seems right that the stronger he gets the greater the Chaos his ascensions spawn. If that does actually happen we may actually be looking forward to a Multiverse on fire when he finally punches through the Terminus :)

Jeff McCulley

Note—check the revised chapter, folks. Middle and at the end.

Jeff McCulley

That time was days. What’s throwing me is that half a day later, the bump on his head still wasn’t healed. Even with the Flame helping.

Taylor Greenwell

Can we all take a moment and consider just how hard that stone would need to hit Zac to completely knock his tank of an ass out? And not just knock him out for a second, but for an extended period? I think the last time he was knocked out like that was during the fight with Mox when 4 supremacies were battling.

Lex Luther S

From the sounds of it, Xiphos came to an understanding that everyone in the empire would have a chance to awaken but those of unique faith, fate, strength or all the above, would have far more difficulty waking up than their citizens. One Xiphos waking up could equal to 10s of millions of citizens, and as someone who wishes to fan the flame of hope, Xiphos would always choose such an option. As for his siblings, I'm guessing he's talking about the others from the empyrean Chalice and other Crusader orders. And zacs identity as a Holy son being exposed shouldn't be that much of an issue now. Id say only the autarchs and above felt what happened while Astoria will likely being able to piece it together as well. But as we know, those above are letting things play out. As for Kaltosa Lu taking such a loss, it was indeed a nice surprise. Losing 1 of 3 primordial runes is definitely a hit to his foundations and should even the playing field between zac and Kaltosa Lu, especially since he now has such perfect counters to zac.

Lex Luther S

In a way, yes. Supremacies collect faith to bolster their heavenly territories so they are in a sense, God's; especially given they rule over sections of the heavens and what could do that but a god? God kings are those that have enough authority to claim a throne or seal. As for naturally born gods like Sevona, it's hard to tell what her strength level was. Im guessing monarchy but with a high degree of authority. August then steals her divine core to ascend to autarchy. It could also be that naturally born gods like sevona can't really be graded thanks to their uniqueness and authority. Sure, they could be a hegemon but go way beyond what a hegemon could do thanks to their authority. Zac is also probably right in that the mercurial court tampered with the real Sevona, giving her a proper grading and turning her into an anchor of sorts for the mercurial court. My guess is she'll reach Peak C grade but have the might of an autarch. A for Mox, you could basically see her as an evil god that stole the longevity of countless others and plains just to prolong her own existence, eventually falling into such madness, that even she was almost completely consumed by it.

Chris

Also, this reference to gods = supremacies right? Is Sevona a supremacy? Mox was referenced as a god right but essentially that means supremacy, and God kings like Eyler (spear of the emperor) were also peak supremacies, so does this mean it's another supremacy like Grand Dream that has been saved for the Limitless Empire?

Chris

I think it was a mistake?

SandreX

Yeah, and unfortunately that was most likely outcome. Hope Astora and Idche will survive. I like those two

Hexodus

1404? What happend to chapter 1403? The last one before the current one is 1402 👀

Zushef

I’m sad Xiphos did the self sacrifice thing and I so want to see if Rava can sense what happened all the way across the universe and if she can what her reaction will be. Zac did promise Rava to find pieces that have been lost and bring them back for her. I think this should count.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Owen Kaz

No. The flame seems to be different than the imperial faith and all it entails. It is likely closer to "Keep progress flowing towards breaching eternity" It was merely co-opted by the empire

Jeff McCulley

Huh. Turns out that Xiphos wasn’t supposed to use Zac as kindling for the Flame in the center chalice of the formation in the middle of the Continent, but Kindle the Flame within Zac. And apparently his siblings still have roles to play. Going to have to go back and check what Courts they went to. I think we can guess that Astora is waiting outside, right? Zac should be WELL rewarded. And, presumably, his cover as the Holy Son if the Empyrean Chalice is blown. Then it seems like time for a/some POV switches. And maybe we’re going to find out that Yselio is starting to cause problems. Lastly…anyone else satisfied that part of Kaltosa Lu (the primordial rune) is now becoming fodder for Zac’s cultivation? Or maybe…kindling?

Silent Consent

Ugg, Zack needs to learn his lesson! Did he just commit to resurrecting the limitless empire!?! Letting them prepare his body as a vessel, because this cannot possibly end well. Just like the remnants all over again.

Jeff McCulley

Unless it’s referring to faction in David Weber’a books?

Jeff McCulley

I suspect he’s going to be restarting the Order from survivors he brings out of the Omnipresence Chamber.

Scott Mingo

I expect being the new seat of the Empyrean Flame will protect Earth from a few of the factions. It will also paint a huge target on their back for several other factions. The Law of Balance must always be appeased. As for restarting the Order. . . ge already has. All those lovely people using the trials back home. Now that he is carrying the Flame, Rava will undoubtedly give Zac more access, and she'll be thrilled to be training proper members of the Order again.

Omiso

I'm not sure giving Zac access to Holy Fire a good idea, he is an Acolyte of Chaos and silent disciple of Michael Bay but if everything is burning then the Flame of the Empyrean Chalice won't be snuffed out. Instructor Rava will be very busy teaching him how to rebuild their order after he comes out.

Chris

I wonder if this will lead to Zac relocating his empire to the Empyreon quadrant given Zecia is done for

Chris

Excellent writing, snappy, cleaned up a point or two, neatly tied the mini-arc together to keep the grand plan ticking on. Very, very nice to read. Spewing Kaltosa really nicked the fateseizer token, but hopefully he just tops it up before a great fight and Zac naturally eats it.

Ryan Pepp

Iz has been furthering and tying the new Order of the Flame to the Empyreon Quadrant! Fantastic connection and subtle drop by TFD for the janitor to take on this excess destiny clean up

Michael Dugan

oh yeah, the Empyrean Throne will NOT be happy that the Empyrean Flame has been rekindled. Wait until they find out about where and how the Atwood Empire is receiving their training.

James Getgood

Yikes, this sets him on a collision path with the Empyreon Throne... aka Grandma Tain... I think he can probably pawn off the rebuilding of the Order to Carl. I wonder how close his core is now to be able to cross into Peak Hegemony. Obviously he's not going to go full monarch yet, too many loose ends to tie off outside the trial before that, but I think he's gonna need the powerup to peak in order to compete.

Lex Luther S

Well now, didnt expect Xiphos to willingly give his life up to rekindle the flame of the future. Very very interesting. Especially his final comment of zac rebuilding the order to off load the burden 😂😂. Still, one worry is how Iz and her family will react; her Dao guardian was already willing to kill zac so no telling what they'll do now that he's accepted and rekindled the flame in the present. Also glad to hear Kaltosa Lu took a heavy hit. Losing one of only 3 primordial runes has to be a heavy hit to his foundations. Welp, Thursday cant come fast enough because I am excited to see this arc come its close as well as what rewards an awakened Idiche will offer to zac and esmeralda.

Alexander Dupree

I’m so happy he got to experience someone else with a harder head directly

Kuurth

Thanks for the chapter! “It wanted the motes of Chaos to restore the Havens.” I believe it should be Heavens here instead of Havens.

Ryan Pepp

Here we go! Gotta love Esmeralda having her priorities straight. When everything has been cleared, look to the new big baddy for some sweet, sweet goodies


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