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Chapter 1,332.

🕑 Added 2025-02-03 21:00:21 +0000 UTC

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Edgar Segura

Now even Emily has an Apostle title to one of her skills.

Edgar Segura

After rereading this for the 4th time I've realized why they're hunting old gods. Its the same thing Zach did to the oblivion and creation tapestry. They're erasing the old gods hold on their territory. To essentially empower the limitless empire but this in particular helps Landio Evrodok because even during the present he still holds the Empryean Thrones Authority. Holy crap almost every chapter drops some insane foreshadowing or insight to the past events or comments

Bailey Tucker

I'm such an Emily fan. A whole Emily chapter feels like a treat!

1FantasyFanatic

LoL “Atwood Empire diplomacy” I love it!

Amani

This was one of my favorite chapters this year.

Shawn Treants

You all are being too reactive. Get off your high horses. He is right. It would be hard to adapt a series this long. And he is right that AI is probably the only way it would happen, especially with this genre. He didn't say it should be done.

Jeff McCulley

Hoping this isn’t a migraine day. Be well, TFD!

Jeff McCulley

Kickin’ axe and takin’ gains?

Owen Stevens

it might be similar to the stele of conflict. The origins don't matter, but it might have significant status to those with authority. Just like the stele of conflict has some effect on fate and the dao of war

Jeff McCulley

To be completely honest, TFD probably needed a plot device to shut Sendor up from overhearing, and “a red scarf” simply popped into his head, perhaps some stray memory from his childhood. And we may never know the backstory he’d have to write around it. Much like that floating castle just for Hegemons. Zac is running out of time on that one.

Owen Stevens

at first i though it a relic from the limitless empire. But since learning more about the universe, it's likely an artifact that persisted from the previous eras.

Lizy Flore

For sure! I love nothing more than complex plots and figuring out which trails are important, but it also means that things I don’t consider important for the main plot sometimes slip by… thankfully, there is this whole community for that 😁

TKO

I can't stop thinking about the terrifying red scarf of doom the system threw at Sendor as a threat so he'd shut up about zac's bloodline. What the hell was that thing?

Jeff McCulley

The stories can be hard to follow. That’s what makes them so fun! ;D

Jeff McCulley

AI screwing over artists, too. Sorry, that’s the facts. You want to use it to complement other areas? Fine, be my guest. But not creators.

Jeff McCulley

Iirc, they were a System reward. Something towards the end of the Incursions.

Timothy Dana

Where did he get those puppets again?

Mike Naka

Well...That escalated quickly. He meant using AI to create an anime, not writing the story. Like it or not AI is going to be replacing a lot of jobs. I have to use AI to stay competitive/employed. We may not like it, but his point is valid. Prolly the only way we see a DoTF cartoon/anime is if AI did it. If TFD went that way, I will admit that I would watch it.

JDemo

You should be shamed excessively for suggesting AI writing should replace creative artist work. Honestly, you should be ashamed to have written that comment. I mean really dude. What the eff?! You should be cursed to never have anything good in life. Ever. Yuck.

JDemo

100%. And the dude has the audacity to say content should be written by AI on an actual author’s Patreon page.

Jeff McCulley

More: Zac’s Guardian Puppets “They’ll come over for upgrades on their own any time you break through a minor stage. However, the reward will only last you until Peak D-grade. We will not be able to turn them into Monarch Puppets.” A thousand puppets, all the same grade as Zac—except for the three leaders, who are a level higher. So, since Zac is now Late D Grade, he should have three Peak D Grade puppets protecting the Island. Or wherever they currently are stationed. Leading a thousand Late D Grade puppets. Oh…and Earth and Ensolus should be Late D Grade as well.

Jeff McCulley

More random reread thoughts: Blowing Up Iz Tayn: “If you blow up every place you visit, you’ll end up living in ruins.” This is almost prescient. A. Because we’ve heard that it’s better if the Fifth Plllar isn’t broken up. B. Well…the Endolus “Ruins”, that aren’t really ruins any longer.

Jeff McCulley

Oh yeah…technically, we’re on the Brink. ;)

Jeff McCulley

F*** AI. And the horse it rode in on.

Jeff McCulley

Random thought rereading. “At least one of us needs to sire some descendants to keep watch of this place,” Ogras grinned. Okay, so it’s been just over twenty years now. How many little Ogras’ (Ogri) are running around Demon Island? Also, “Watch over”.

Lizy Flore

Well, that’s my bad then. Sorry for misinformation.

Tartlet

This makes a certain amount of sense, and in the original time, it went bad and the sun god ascended or whatever

Tartlet

I immediately thought of the Vulcan hello

Jason Hatter

Wooo, mah girl! Kickin' axe as always!

Borbino the great

Yeah fr Zac would’ve just eaten the sun god too

jsw

"Atwood Diplomacy" 😂 Perhaps a bit of nod to Star Wars and aggressive negotations.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Palmer Evans

The only way to adapt a series this long would be to use AI once it’s good enough. Everyone seems to hate that idea so we will probably never get any kind of adaptation :(

Evan Therrien

Need this whole series as an anime. Could never do live action

Andrew

Thank you!

Jeff McCulley

I once worked with a gal with that name. Her last name was Swalla. Swear to god! I think that Suzy the Salamander needs an ability that swallows attacks, much as Alea’s. Because why not?

Jeff McCulley

Well, she was the first of many that he lavished. Joanna, Vilari… And even more so, she adventured enough with Zac for some of his fare to rub off.

Jeff McCulley

Suzy the Salamander!

Jeff McCulley

In case no one caught it… Remember what we heard a few chapters ago about how the Empire likes to prey on evil entities, and seize their Authority? Well, Emily thinks that she was supposed to infiltrate the cult in order to disband it. Instead, this is a trap. Whomever this “True Sun” is, perhaps an Ancient from the book. It’s about to become lunch. And Emily is about to get a huge chunk of Imperial Merit, and a seat in the Radiant Court. Matter of fact, it will be interesting to see who knows she’s a sealbearer. Also remember, Xiphos just told us another of his fellow Empyrean Chalice reps was heading to the Radiant Court (along with the Starfall).

Jeff McCulley

Vikari and Thea both had chained memory domains, we just didn’t see the full context. Vikari’s persona was literally investigating a series of crimes.

Jairo H

OMG, I LOVE this comment! XD

Jeff McCulley

May not be a cliff, just the spot where TFD has shown that Emily is definitely going to win—and moves on to someone else Wednesday.

Jeff McCulley

Suggested Edits “other compatriots” >companions. Very few to none are her compatriots. Especially since Carl headed elsewhere. “still ways from” > a ways OR a long way “of a mysterious Cardinal” >clandestine OR obscured OR elusive “her fervent siblings” >fervent faux siblings “the depths of the sun. Something surpassing Emily’s understanding had appeared in its depths” Double use >deep inside. “to take out the cult’s competition while embezzling their treasuries” Whose treasuries is she “embezzling”? If it’s the cult’s competition, that’s raiding, not embezzling “ritualistic circle” >ritual “didn’t look optimistic” >positive OR she wasn’t optimistic “Worse, The True Sun” >the True Sun “fight without care for” > a care for OR any care “held a mysterious power” >subtle (“mysterious” is WAY overused) “releasing a suffocating gale that suffocated the flames” Overused >stifling OR suffocating/stifled “companion live Verun” >like “Suzy’s unbelievable transformation” >incredible “realized totem pole” > realized the totem pole

Sirloki

Ack! Just when the Dao of the Cliff begins to wane we are reminded of its presence.

Tommy

😂😂😂 Of course Emily is up to her neck in shit soon as we see her

J L

zac spared no expense for her, she was destined for greatness

Lizy Flore

By chained I meant following the same narrative. I believe Vilari specifically hunted the statues in memory domains, bypassing those that didn’t have them, while Emily followed domain after domain to continue the story. For me, the two are different. Unless I misunderstood sth of course.

Hartmann

Vilari had chained memory domains with the different aspects of the Emotions

Edgar Segura

I dont know how you do it but you make everyone of your characters compelling and really feel like a person. Gj

StuBee3

Fun chapter! Thanks 😎

Omiso

Wow Emily is doing great and that transformation of her fractal skill, she's basically Monarch confirmed. The greed she is showing is proof she's truly is following into Zac's footsteps but she has yet to match her master. Not enough paranoia, Zac would've known when something is going too well you're heading into a trap.

Flameboy

I’m sad to say it’s only with this chapter that I finally understand the memory domains now. Genius idea!

Michael

Godslayer cannons finally earning their name

Lizy Flore

Thanks for the chap! Looks like Emily will end up with a solid identity for the Radiant Court. I don’t think we’ve seen chained memory domain like that before, and I think it means that that cult had been a massive pain in the RC butt. Participating in the failure of their plan may even grant Emily an Imperial Credit, who knows. But overall, it’s just so good to hear from Emily and have a look at her growth. She has come a long way from the scared orphan Zac picked up in the integration.

Flameboy

Awesome! Loving this arc! I cannot wait for more! Correction “ The powerful Natural Treasure had imparted Suzy with a true spirit, turning her into a summoned companion live Verun.” Should be “like” Verun. 😁

DrSubterfuge

I hope we get part two of this POV. Excited to see what her reward is for this. A skill gaining spirituality is dope as hell. Fuck yeah salamander buddy.

Lex Luther S

Interesting. It seems Emily has truly continued her path as an elite of the Atwood empire, with the foundations for monarchy coming into full swing too. And SUZZZZYYYYYYYYY!!! She's a genuine being now, seems with a soul to boot. Well on her way. I must say, the resources and rewards for helping here are gonna be tasty indeed. Wednesday needs to get here real quick.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks

Jake

First , cause why not


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