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Chapter 1,350.

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 19:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Edgar Segura

Greenworth is the name of the town Robert Atwood died in btw. The name of the town Zac is from is being mention here. But I can't tell if its because the ocean is using knowledge from his mind to supplement this scenario and then converting it from Dreams/Fantasy/illusion into a real place. I guess we'll find out near the end of this arc.

MacMahon Wenzl

*Deviant Asura

Kirin

Hmm, chapter already laid it out heart and dao are the themes, seeing someone from young and energetic to grown and responsible to sickly then death is bound to give him insights and strengthen his comprehension of evolving life and sealed death and temper his heart, he might be a ruler but how much time has he actually spent living on earth, and i do mean just living minus all the worries and responsibilities… there should be some changes in his mind set after this… always good to see character development… and slowing down is always the way you achieve that.

Eric Totten

That is by far my favorite episode ever.

PapaJaypes

Re-reading and thinking about this mini arc reminds me of the Star Trek Next Generation episode where Picard lives the entire adult life of a person on a dying planet, having a wife, and eventually kids and grandkids. Will the next time we see Draugr Zac be when he's on the brink of dying from old age?

Porter

I'm enjoying it. It is the only way for him to develop the artist side of himself. He was hardly going to improve his carvings in his normal ventures. And I think you are right in that it is all a test of conviction.

John

I bet there’s a good chance we see a chapter like that closer to the middle of the arc. Don’t we usually get worldly update chapters at the beginning of the second half of arcs?

Arthur

That would be disappointing.

drag0nreb0rn

I didn't see Iz

Jonas Lemke

I'm guessing the main challenge is to see if he still has the momentum or drive to continue on after living a full, peaceful life. The street being called Greenworth may be a trap to confuse his mortal home town with the street in the illusion. If he manages to hold on to his identity, path, and goals by the end of living a peaceful, fulfilling life, he'll probablybe able to break the illusion. It's also giving him the opportunity to relax, and digest his experiences and temper his heart. I don't know what I want more, to see the conclusion of his time on Greenworth St. Or the reunion with Tavza

Stolen Hero

I think the cycle of life and death he will see... Is Helisent going from a child, to a young adult, to a married woman, to a mother, to a grandmother, then passing. And then the cycle continues, as her daughter grows older. And round and round it goes.

DrSubterfuge

So, Zac hasn't become a Heart cultivator, but he's definitely becoming more in tune with his Heart and how it relates to the world. He's getting better at feeling that ineffable connection with things, and that helps him bring out the spirituality of the wood he's carving in accordance with his Daos. It seems like the solution here is going to be carving some kind of masterwork, sort of his own version of what Janos did when he was caught in his own dream. Except I doubt it will happen until toward the end of the eighty years he estimated for the body he's in. And that's going to be bittersweet since most (all?) of the people he currently knows in the village won't live that long. The big question, I think, is what his final work will be about. My guess is Helisent's life will influence it a lot one way or another. Right now she seems like his strongest connection in the village, and I don't see that changing.

Mariane

The illusion must be taking inspiration from Zac's memories since he is living on Greenworth St which is where he was living pre-integration. Also I think Janos said that Zac's boat was 1month. So if 1 week = 16 years then zach could potentially be stuck for 64 years

Omiso

It does sound better than Deviant Asura, lets see if the moniker sticks.

Tyler S.

Everyone sad he never had time to work on his craft, now he can get the rest of a lifetime

Lizy Flore

Well that’d be fun, but I don’t think we are getting one until the end of the Ultom Arc.

Dan

Such a great way to put it. He has a loving touch when writing these kinds of chapters that both showcase his skill as an author and the depth of his world building. It makes these “slower” chapters feel breezy, not “slow”. The story is moving along and not plodding, like one would assume.

Dan

And just think what he’ll be able to do with Cosmic Forge now that he’s had the time to settle down and really focus on his carving.

Dan

I think he will experience Death with the death half of his dual body.

Ben

I’m just trying to get an Ilvere wrecking cultists/war update subchapter.

John

Shit, we eatin Made me chuckle when the girl called Zac uncle and then reading, “Zac remained in his rocking chair a while longer” 💀

Pascal Kwizera

Hope your joking

Markus

It would be funny if the only way out of the illusion is to die inside the illusion. I find this and last chapter interesting and good for world building. On earth every mortel can reach level 75 just by killing beast, pre system 20 is a lot.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Johnny

My thoughts exactly. I’ll never complain about artistic choices but I’m more than ready for Draugr Zac to escape the mundane

Jeff McCulley

“Chaosbringer” Tavza nailed it. And she’d be the one to know.

Jeff McCulley

This went from an idyllic interlude to “cultivation stuff I can’t get a handle on”, but at least painted a path out. Then the POV handoff to HZac, which is what I needed. With a Tavza bonus! I’ll be interested to see if she managed to fix her “deviation” on her own. I’m kind of assuming she has, if she can release the Abyss. Will be happy if we don’t see DZac again until he’s stepping out of the illusion.

Jeff McCulley

Tavza >>>>>>>>> Catheya.

Lucas Gulick

Lol

Lucas Gulick

This is mortal arc is really cool, I'll admit to having been a bit skeptical when Zac split bodies originally but it's really allowed a unique narrative and story structure as multiple plotlines are pursued. TFTC as always!

Omiso

Is 4 vs 1 against Mox so the odds are getting better. Now if any of Tavza minions survived they can improve their odds a little more and with Zac's half a plan and some improvisation chances are they gonna blow the memory lantern with Mox in it.

Tom C

Thanks for the chapter! 🥳

Taylor Greenwell

This is a good sign. I was worried his draugr half's experience in the illusion was going to be an arc as long as the orom world's. A lot of important things for his cultivation happened there, but it was tough to get through. The slow / introspective chapters are nice for a week or two, but when it gets down to it I am here to see Zac fuck shit up.

Summas76

Segments like this past chapter and a half are why I keep renewing my subscription. Theres such sincerity with how TFD writes these minor characters, man; my eyes were getting a little misty when I was reading the part about her manning the counter, and him needing to make a special carving to commemorate her wedding.

Rayyyn

Great chapter!! 😆

johnson bottleflipper

Finally best girl is back

Lex Luther S

Ohhh, BOY, what a chapter. Zacs had a good 16 years to work on his craftsmanship; nice nice, and he's got a path to get out. Truly, this illusion is zacs next step towards upgrading his daos and even a breakthrough with his heart cultivation. Wonderful indeed. Welp, good thing conformation of supremacy is late stage now. That'll be a big Ole boost for what's to come. And now Tavza is here as well. I figured she and zacs human half would be the ones to meet, and I'm glad it happened. She's only interacted with his undead persona but never his human side, so I'm really looking forward to where Wednesdays chapter goes. Especially since she called him "chaos bringer," which means she may know zac and arcaz are one. Wonder what her reaction will be to kators' death. She likely won't be surprised. Tavza will be a big help against Mox too, once zac gets ahold of the literal chaos She's got running around in her body. Wonder how zac can use it; maybe against mox? Fuck man WEDNESDAY come ONNNNN

James Getgood

Oh hi Tavsa. Oh yeah, about Kator.. right... oops

Lizy Flore

Incredible chapter. Exploring Zac’s Dao Heart then back to human Zac and Ogras. And Tavza, of course ! I’m so glad to finally see her 😁

M💬

TFD talking about Zac’s mortal heart and him using it to comprehend life and death might be one of my favorite links in the story. Zac is a cultivator and follow the rules of the jungle but it doesn’t change how compassionate he can be at times, what we mostly see is how his enemies view him.

Jason Bradford

Things be starting to heat up, now (rubs hands together)!!!

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