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Hound of the Dead Chapter 20: Panic

🕑 Added 2025-12-16 19:54:42 +0000 UTC

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NimtheWriter

That's an error. I missed it during correction. Here is the corrected paragraph. She's talking about Yoshito. ‘Why the hell did he even let that criminal join our group?’ she thought bitterly. "You’ve got to be kidding me." She needed to find him, to grab him, to knock some sense into his thick skull.

NimtheWriter

Hmm, aye true. I also felt something was missing from that part but wasn't exactly sure what. Your comment helped piece it together now. I will be reworking some details/adding scenes in the last chapter to improve it further.

Nerozaz

Great to see a new chapter thank you. I was confused by this sentence: "Why the hell did I even let that guy join our group?" she thought bitterly. "You’ve got to be kidding me." She needed to find him, to grab him, to knock some sense into his thick skull. Who is she talking about? She dosen't mention a name.

Saraga

Thanks for the chapter

Lotus92

Maybe it's just me but the last three chapters with how the Shido arc concluded felt off for me in regards to cu actions and reasoning. The conclusion would have felt more like something Shirou would have done in the almost masochistic need to save everyone and trying not kill anyone while not actually prioritising what's actually important. Like that no one died from the busted gated while he went on a very chase is pure luck ironically enough from the pure chaos and hysteria alone. Something only he let happen in first place. Nor Emiya or Cu are like that. Cu is a hero but not in the idealistic way and he was always pragmatic as seen in stay night. But maybe it's just me and my warped expectations of the cu actions. Anyway since this arc finally over I hope we get back to the actual fun interactions. I wish you a very Christmas

Travis100

Damn cu and his luck with orange hair girls? XD

NimtheWriter

Thanks and Merry Christmas to you too!

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the story so far 🙂! I hope to be reading much more of this greatly interesting story 😄! And I wish you a very Merry Christmas 🎄!


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