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Err... yes! ...Exactly as I intended!

Absolutely. Now that the story aspect is mostly dealt with, the rest is basically just following poor Jess in captivity.

Scenedusk

Is that the Hangman's reflection in the tape gag?

Devduck01

"There, the Horror is over now" oh you have to love his unintended irony, for Jessica the horror has only just begun :)

Finally there is a new page! I hope to see more of her new bondage posture on the next page - sexy ass and legs, chest and waist~~~~~~~

Al-Azizul Hakim

Whoa that turn dark quickly. Thought he would rough them up and send them to the ICU but did not expect this. Loving your portrayal and character building of Hangman so far. Thanks Telikor you’re on a roll

jangluer

Yep now they know how he earned his Moniker , hanging out with him can be unhealthy . Nice action perspective sequence , bravo !!!!!!

Another great page. Seeing SW helpless hanging there whilst the hoodlums are dealt with has been great. Do we get an answer on why she can’t snap out of her bounds? Or any self reflection she maybe thinking to herself behind the gag why she’s unable too?

Amaniwolf

Loving this, poor henchies.

Ooh, brutal...! See, Jessica? This is what your misguided "heroine-ism" leads to!

Feedback is much appreciated. I probably wouldn't have pushed the horror this far if we weren't already aware that Hangman is a psycho. We've seen him do... pretty much this exact thing in the comics before. And everyone has a different threshold of when the danger becomes off-putting rather than exciting. But I'll keep in mind where most of my audiences threshold likely is. Thanks. So for the angles. I very much agree. It was a little awkward to keep cutting back to Spider-Woman during all this since she isn't/can't do anything. But I felt the need since this is her book. I've actually restructured the next two pages a little to vary up the shots some more.

Malcolm

Hi, you are extremely talented and this comic is fantastic. I did want to share two pieces of feedback for consideration that could even add to the level of epicness of this comic. 1) Generally in peril comics we all want to see the heroine in peril, but usually avoid feelings of actual horror or gruesomeness, as that usually makes the peril seem actually scary and dangerous in a non fun and sexy way. Hangman when he looks really angry as in the last page, or when you see him hang people to me that gets into horror and instead of peril it seems actually like she is dealing with a person that will actually hurt Spiderwoman which I dont think anyone wants. So one thing to consider is that I think we all love that hangman is great with peril but we dont want to feel that he is crazy or a psycopath and that Spiderwoman would actually get hurt. 2) From an angle perspective - for the last few pages we have seen quite a few shots of spiderwoman in the current pose she is in. Since we are all here because we are big fans of her and being in peril, the more the angle gets changed up, for example show her in the current position but also with her rear ;) or things like that would keep it exciting. Your art is fantastic, but it feels like for the last few pages we keep seeing the frontal shot of her hoisted up and looking forward and since we all look forward to new pages, the more variety of peril the more your loyal fans would appreciate you more. I hope none of this offends you, as its not meant to, just sharing some feedback on the great work you have done. If others disagree, or agree, feel free to chime in.

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Bluejazzysongbird

Well.... he is the called the hangman, I guess I should've expected that

destroxxiv

At last, now it's just the two of them. Fantastic page!

Bruno Hamm

Not much to say except your work is truly amazing and I'm so excited for the future of this story.

A fan

For her, it looks like the horror is just beginning.

Another excellent page and again I am astounded how you are able to convey emotion on Jessica's face when she wears a mask hiding her eyes and her mouth is taped, you can feel and see her horror, fear, and helplessness I still want to see more angry Jessica though, I am looking forward to page 23, since it begins Hangman and Jessica's alone time unless you have another twist upcoming.