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Chapter 187: Narrative Floors

🕑 Added 2024-03-27 15:30:03 +0000 UTC

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Krish Gupta

There's a weird double paragraph, the surge of mana part. Not sure if that's intentional or not.

omar el amrani

Actually super cool idea

omar el amrani

I was going to write a long comment in response, but I think I will just do it in the story lol

ManguKing

Doesn't thorian have enough earth mages to build tunnels that create a safe and direct path between each village? I also think that an earthen wall could still serve as a detractor for weaker beast or a great method to slow down any enemies.

ManguKing

I would actually like to read an interlude in which we get to see Oswalt dungeon clearing the monsters, but focused more on the slice of life aspect over the combat. Many will not like it, but it would give so much depth to see Oswalt waking up from a nightmare of his dad, struggling with his own actions, fighting the urge to get drunk, only to start healing thanks to his team.


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