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Chapter 201: Combat Hall Training

🕑 Added 2024-06-23 21:09:08 +0000 UTC

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Draxas

You are awesome, thank you for writing this.

omar el amrani

Thank you so much for the kind words. By that last comment, you mean when the POV changes and Thorian is being referred to as "Alan"? I guess I could do something like writing Alan in between quotes at the start of the POV change to make the reader remember the double identity thing

Jacob Goodrich

I absolutely love the story and am so glad to see another chapter come. I've been rereading everything to this point. I love the indepth pov changes and also how thorian is handling himself in the abyss. My one suggestion would be to make sure readers see thorian as alan


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