LeoTodrius
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On the Other Foot
🕑 Added 2026-01-05 17:35:41 +0000 UTCPart of college is exploring, seeking out new experiences to discover what life truly has to offer. Coming across an errant coin minted for a hyena themed arcade, Austin finds himself with a crush on one of the employees. Feeling as though he won the jackpot, that employee flirts back. Sometimes even a desert can have a slippery slope, sweeping the two up into a version of their lives they never saw coming.
Comments
Leo Todrius
I am so glad you noticed!! I took a page out of cinema by having the cold open, jumping back, and then jumping forward again. I like it every once in a while in TV but you have to be careful not to over-do it because it can get confusing. I've done linear forward time jumps before, but never quite this back and forth. I'm so glad you liked it and took the time to comment. Thank you!
Falleninsea
Different and I enjoyed that. Did you change how you normally tell you. Story? I donβt remember you doing this time jump thing before. Either way I liked it it felt different some how.
Toruk
oooo new story! π
