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［Manga］Castlevania Part 1 - Carmilla (Revised Edition)

🕑 Added 2023-09-15 14:21:48 +0000 UTC

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Jake Well

Your welcome and I just noticed you already fixed the 2nd page before I commented. I downloaded this set a day before the pages were modified on the 16th haha. Happy to help though!

Foot croft

Thanks!

Jake Well

This was much better then before, thank you for revising! I read the whole thing and besides two sentences that are missing a word or changed a bit, everything else is much better compared to before. Love the improved onomatopoeia too as it's easier to see, read and very pleasantly designed! Here're the two sentences that you can change and fix up for better readability: --- original sentence +++ revised sentence Pg. 02 --- "How about do it my way?" +++ "How about I do it my way?" Pg. 25 --- "And I wonder how this one taste like?" +++ "And I wonder what this one tastes like?" Other than that, it's great and thank you as always Footcroft! ^_^

Zanpakuto14

Honestly, I thought I had no problems with the previous subtitles. However, I find this to be a much-improved experience. The one thing I will say though is that I do wish there were more POV style panels. I still think it's awesome though! Also, Sharp toenails, like Carmilla's fingernails. Just a thought, I don't how many people are into that.