Jack Torrance
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Dusk Chapter Six
🕑 Added 2022-08-28 19:08:53 +0000 UTCWhat was she thinking?!
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Odog
It's interesting to watch Dawn's slowly widening waistline and not think about how it'll effect her at work. It'd be a cruel twist of fate if she eventually got her old post back but was vastly overweight and a shell of herself. Nevertheless I'm really intrigued to see how you incorporate your dark writing into her workplace. Dawn's the definition of a go-getter. I wonder how she'll cope with losing favor at work not only due to attitude but her weight gain. Will she start cutting corners? How will her co-workers, who've had to endure Dawn's high standards, react? Great work!
