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Whatever Happened to Her? Part II
🕑 Added 2022-10-31 16:54:49 +0000 UTCI am not exactly thrilled with how this one turned out. It was one of those pieces that took forever to take shape and when it did I still didn't like it. No matter how many times I revised or tried to add to it it just never got there. Strong start weak finish. I think I got too wrapped up in the premise and failed to realize there was little to it beyond that. So here it is. I'll have the November schedule up ASAP and a new original story next Monday. Sorry guys.
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As usual I rather enjoyed this!
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Honestly I think the conclusion here is stronger than the opening - the character's psychology in the first chapter came across as a little bizarre, even from smut standards, but the framing of it from a media perspective here makes it seem more natural, as if the media persona has blended into her waking life. And this ultimately kinda makes the conclusion a little more arousing. Good work!
