Jack Torrance
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I Worry About Us (SSBBW, XWG, IMMOBILITY, MORBIDITY, SLOB)
🕑 Added 2020-12-06 21:18:19 +0000 UTCTRIGGER WARNING!!!!
This one is fucking DARK. It's about a couple, Kiley and Leandra, who met at a weight loss clinic. They bonded over their shared trauma and rough upbringings, as well as their favorite coping mechanism: food.
This is a brutal depiction of two women whose addiction to food has cost them almost everything. There is morbidity throughout. They are barely mobile. Their lifestyles are described in graphic detail. Severe health issues. Mobility issues. Verbal abuse. Co-dependency. Enabling. The psychologies of their compulsive eating are explored. There are references to bathroom things, but only references. No real descriptions.
It's nearly 40 pages long, but if you like this kind of stuff, you will be titillated throughout.
IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE DARK STUFF, FEAR NOT!!! I WILL BE RELEASING A PALLETTE CLEANSER BONUS STORY TOMORROW. It's considerably more lighthearted. It involves Mel, the girl from "Boredom", as she tells us a story about a very pivotal moment in her life as a feedee. It's very cutesy and lovey dovey but in addition to my typical fatty fare I included a nice sex scene at the end.
Comments
Jacob
this is the Greatest Thing ive ever read this is what im so happy to you for man
Snow jerry
Wow, this was really something. Good stuff. Not sure how to compliment work like this but 10/10
Jack Torrance
Thank you so much, man!!!! The fact that you read the whole thing and weren't turned on by it is, in my opinion, some of the best praise a writer like me can receive. Obviously I was catering to the extremists of the extreme weight gain fandom with this one, but I also wanted to draw in people who don't find the subject matter erotic but the premise disturbing enough to give it a shot. Pique their morbid curiosity and give them a look into a lifestyle that is incomprehensible to them. I am currently working on a non-porn novel!! It involves feedism but it's not erotica. I wanna give a human portrayal to the kink and the very real ethical conflicts that come with pursuing it. I'm actually talking to a VERY well known SSBBW artist (on deviantart, anyway) about designing the cover. He seems to be interested, but I don't wanna announce it until it's set in stone. Pretty much everything I write deals with subject matter that is disturbing, offensive, vulgar, etc. etc. So finding a publisher isn't a big priority for me. I'd rather publish and promote it myself to my own audience and HOPEFULLY it'll get me some crossover success. I really wanna share more about the book with you guys but as it's a work in progress I'd like to have more of it finished before I share it with you.
Soja
Two Things: 1. This story turned me off so hard 2. You're an excellent writer. Once I put my dick away, I read this through to the end. It's so dark, but it's so vivid, and the characters are so believable. You could write a straight-ahead non-porn novel, but I can't imagine who would publish it, considering how disturbing I imagine it would be. Kudos to you! And to those turned on by this story, I ain't judging. This guy is giving you the goods like no other writer out there.
