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Dusk Chapter Twenty Seven

🕑 Added 2023-10-09 21:54:26 +0000 UTC

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Jack Torrance

I'm sorry you weren't satisfied with the ending man. You aren't the only one who found it underwhelming. This story suffered in a variety of ways behind the scenes and while I like the ending I think it's one of my weakest ones overall.

Michael m ccray

I wanted more just saying

Hilal

It feels like a natural ending to Dawn’s storyline! I like how she’s still with Trevor! I think this is my second favorite ending to a story of yours with Dr. Gladwell being the first :) Can’t wait to see what you’re doing next!

Odog

You wrapped it up very nicely with this chapter, some of your best writing I've read, the cliffhanger. But a part of me felt the ending was getting intriguing and could have been tied in with Hard Time.

Jack Torrance

Thank you very much man Im glad I stuck it out I think it definitely caught a second wind toward the end

Tattei

I know you mentioned you wasn't all that into this story, but I think it might be one of my favourite things I've ever read. Although I'll definitely miss reading it I'm thankful you kept up with it for as long as you did, and didn't just leave it hanging