Jack Torrance
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Dusk Chapter Eighteen
🕑 Added 2023-02-27 06:19:24 +0000 UTCAye only took me 18 chapters to get into FAT territory.
Annnnd we'll go ahead and delete the shit I wrote when I was in a shit mood. Thanks guys.
Release schedule coming on the 1st or 2nd. Turning up the heat. I gotta get those fucking numbers back up. Last year I got a little distracted cuz I was writing a novel in addition to my full time gig (WAH!) and patreon obligations. More on that later. Love you all. Have a good night.
Comments
Laptop Suc
Welp... (holds breath again :P)
Jack Torrance
I'm very happy you've been enjoying the story, it is not ending any time soon, I was just in one of my moods last night and let it spill over here.
Laptop Suc
Mike Volpe
Hard disagree on this not working. Definitely feels independent and uniquely successful, a top story of yours for me (so far)
Zachary Shaw
You'll definitely hear this alot but based on this and some of your other posts, I think your being your own worst enemy. Your stories are great. Like I'll be honest with you your easily one of the better writers on this genre of smut fiction. I actually care about your characters. Your incredible at making them fully rounded individuals. I almost want them to succeed in losing weight at times or at least succeed in life. Im actually sympathetic most of the time to your character and I can't say that with most other stories. I'm enjoying our nurses journey and Im actually ok with how gradual the weight gain has been. Just keep going dude your doing great,band try to be a little kinder to yourself.
sakura
You are far too hard on yourself. This is an amazing story and I for one rate it among my favorites. Seeing her go from motivated thin nurse to complacent and tired fatty is beyond hot.
