Jack Torrance
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Dr. Ablehr
🕑 Added 2023-04-03 17:23:58 +0000 UTCNorma... Albehr. N... Ablehr. ENABLER?!?! NILBOG, IT'S GOBLIN SPELLED BACKWARDS!!!
I like this one. I think it has some of my best descriptive writing in a long time. It's kinda dumb and the premise is goofy but at it's core I think it's cute.
Comments
Jack Torrance
Thank you! The good thing about these little one off stories I do is that they don't necessarily have to stay one offs and can become full fledged series. I'd definitely be open to doing more with Norma in the future.
Candice M
Joke is on me for not reading this until now. I actually found Norma surprisingly believable character, much aided by the particularities of her background. I hope we get a sequel--or better still--a prequel of the doctor battling the temptations of her attraction that led her to such a morally-dubious private practice. This was really original
Tyler Gray
This is the best I’ve read in a while! Loved the deep descriptions of each character’s body and movements. The doctor’s depravity was really relatable. Always happy to see Amy the Hairdresser back on the scene. I keep thinking about the way you described her fucked up legs. And I liked the struggles, sweat, and heft you portrayed. Bravo!
John Dough
Another absolute banger. You're the best in the business. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
