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Stumbling into Victory 3

🕑 Added 2026-01-23 12:58:50 +0000 UTC

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Joyeus

Just riding around on a big doggo with its own moon shining down on it would make for a good debut. Through in a flaming warrior or an evil butler for backup.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

I doubt Cash Money Kaiba would bother pulling up to the function unless our MC opens a pack with a Blue Eyes White Dragon. And i mean, what are the odds we'll get to see a BEWD vs Lung fight? I think John is toootally fine.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Can Bitch enhance Silverfang? Probably to both would be my guess

Mello_1412

I just realized: Would Taylor be able to control the insect type monsters? 🤔

Tony Martin

Cool chapter, glad to see things progressing. I am curious if the costume will stay mundane or if Atem will teach ways to empower it. Like infusing it with power so it's tougher or self cleaning (doing laundry on your hero clothes is very funny but sad), or a way to turn it into a card to summon/desummon as needed. Name wise there is a mandatory suggestion for card powers and the costume matching makes it even more required, Gambit. Beyond that I'm not a fan of names that explain your powers. A cape name should identify who they are and give an idea of their personality and values. By being named after the power itself it reduces them down to Brute #264. If you look at cape names there is a trend that older capes are named after ideals and who they want to be while younger ones are named after their powers since that is what defines their life. With that mini rant out of the way, some actual name suggestions. Arbiter. In the same theme of having the power to make decisions as Pharaoh or Emperor but less narcissistic and isn't Judge to avoid the judge, jury, and executioner link. Anchor. He will provide provide safety and security against the chaos happening all around, fits with Brockton Bay being a port city. Herald. Things will be alright, help has arrived. Can also reference him calling out monster, but he needs more knight type monsters to really fit.

TotallyNotEvil

Wearing the armor would be pretty clever, ngl. Instant Brute rating if he could figure it out. Also, riding the wolf by itself makes it very valuable, we know that Bitch proved giant puppers are the premier urban vehicle in Brockton Bay. He has a lot of fire-blasting creatures, some spooky evil looking ones, some basic makes big bonk ones, and a couple of interesting ones, like the living cannon, the one that attacks with EM waves (could it shock Shadow Stalker?), the giant bug that wraps people up is very appropriate for heroic takedowns.

Creature of Grimm

Good chapter. Suggestion for somthing he could do. Since he was worried about looking like a villian, send one of his summons with a note to either PRT or New Wave, saying he is a hero, please don't attack me or my summons on sight. I mostly think it would be funny depending on which he picked to deliver it.

Kyeen

You know if I was in the mc shoes I would be legitimately concerned that kaiba would somehow show up to duel.

Grey Dusk

Time for him to hit the field huh? Hinotama was definitely an interesting spell to pull. I am curious, could he wear Hard Armour? It is a living suit of armour so...


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