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Myth//OS - Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2025-06-28 23:07:17 +0000 UTC

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Bear Minimum

Feels kind of weird that she doesn't struggle to say 'disruptive' but has to split 'Me. Too' into two parts.

UnderwhelmingBird

You've been doing a solid job trickling in bits and bobs and neat little things. Between the All-Speech moments and the Ebonshroud things, the interplay you've set up with various characters. All makes me wanna dig deep and find out more Then there are the other times when we get a smidge of comedic relief from Aylin's inward thoughts like her "sorry in advance, vampy..." cause she's a hoot, at least on the inside. Been a minute since I've read a story with a MC that doesnt speak up much yet still manages to be compelling.

Converted

I'm enjoying the vibe given off of the ancient night creature trying to figure out modern technology. I'm looking forward to seeing the interplay of trying to be both a warden and an anarch.

Lost Rain

I’m working on that. Trying not to do too many lore dumps, and leaning into a more gradual reveal of the world as it comes up.

Arkus86

I have one issue with Myth//OS - there's never enough of it. But really, it's fun to read. I particularly liked the bit where All-speech translated the taunt against wolves. If there's one thing I would like to see at some point, though, is some elaboration on the "last city" part. Why things are the way they are, and how did only Bastion managed to survive as it did.

kreiverin

I'm want progress))


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