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Outrun - Chapter 273

🕑 Added 2025-07-07 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Arkeus

First few paragraphs are doubled

UnderwhelmingBird

Nice nice looks like Hope's rep is gonna be looking good, how kind of the dear doctor to implicate himself so thoroughly. It's good Shiro didn't have to bother with planting evidence, and even better she had talented folk to bypass that pesky security. Probs woulda been a pain in the ass, if she could even *find* a way to do it quietly.

Arkus86

She was shown to be able to target the skill practically from the start if I remember, so I assume some innate knowledge on how to use it is part of the default package. She also practiced it in action occasionally. As for kinetic, there is certainly room for training, though her ability to disable some electronic locks and similar feats can be explained by the combination of her control of lightning and technical expertice letting her know precisely where to send it/how to use it for maximum effect.

Gardor

"I’ll get us moving"-> not sure if this is on purpose, to show her making a mistake and revealing her identity, but if not it should probably be "them moving". "I flickered Fear the Reaper from behind the Knights. The bulky guard I targeted shuddered"-> can she "target" this aura? She never really trains with it, when did she get technically proficient? This loops back to my "she needs someone to train her to be a kinetic" whining, maybe Fox can do her a solid and send her a quest to learn at the Fox Shrine. Or whichever eidolon is most closely associated with lightning, i guess. Was that Wolf? Tyftc

W Maxwell Cassity-Guilliom

Hope is a good commander. She planned it with enough overwhelming force and speed that they were able to go non-violent, and gave the primary investigation role to Shiro and Dev, actually sharp investigators.

Almost Famous

We double pasted our comments haha

Lost Rain

I fixed it. Thank you!

Lost Rain

Thank you. It’s fixed.

Almost Famous

Think you doubled pasted the chapter

William Fullerton

Nice chapter it seems like you double pasted

Lost Rain

It’s fixed. Thank you for pointing that out!

John Pratt

This chapter is duplicated in the text.


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