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Outrun - Chapter 275

🕑 Added 2025-07-11 22:04:02 +0000 UTC

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UnderwhelmingBird

Glad to see her sneaky secrets are staying safe. The more they check the more secure their assumption there's nothing to be found :) Viper's Strike sounds like a specialized augment to Intuition. Like for 'borgs, knowing where would actually be feasible to attack/vulnerable is almost more important than getting a hit in. I had kinda figured the enhanced hearing perk would be half-and-half. Half augmentation, half actually developing the skill to properly use the modification.

Scholar of Endless Knowledge

TFTC

Lost Rain

That’s a good idea. Next chapter?

Gardor

A good way for her to be clued in to how valuable/useful the gems Corvin (Corvid?) brings her is to use one to transmute something, and then be blown away with how much material she gets out of it. Then she'll actually make it a priority to see what the glowing magic rocks that her demigod buddy brings her actually are.

Lost Rain

I’ll fix it in a bit. It was supposed to be Corvid. I’m going to be honest, I was half asleep while writing this one. Sorry for all the errors.

Gardor

"I doubt whatever I’d get would be as useful as that," -> this is twice in this chapter she thinks "my next perk won't be as good as my first", but like...why would she think that? Beyond the fact that its her second perk, and it'd be human nature to think the more difficult to acquire one would be better, why wouldnt she assume whichever perk she gets would be equally as useful? Her perks function as a skill tree right, where gaining some is dependent on earlier choices? “What do you think, Corvin" "a situation like with Corvid" -> why did i think the good sprite, the one she met first, was named Corvid, and the bad bird was named Corvin? Did their names switch, or have i always been wrong?

Gardor

"A blue purple sat clutched in his grasp. “Caw?” ”Hey. Got something for me?” I eyed the gym." There are two "gem" related typos in these sentences.

LostinLimbo

Tyftc. Now I have anxiety about her hidden lair being discovered. I think there is a typo here: ”Hey. Got something for me?” I eyed the gym. It was the same blue one as before. Still had no idea what they were or what they did." Gym should be gem, yes?


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