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Outrun - Chapter 276

🕑 Added 2025-07-14 22:04:00 +0000 UTC

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UnderwhelmingBird

Elevation nudges could be useful for bypassing traffic in a pinch. Especially if said traffic is a road block or rambunctious lad trying to paste you for definitely no good reason because you're an innocent soul who has done no wrong. Also gosh dangit Mira I bet you wanted to spring a nice/pleasant surprise for your friend and got snagged. She's definitely wholesome enough for that. ohh she's gonna be so impressed when Shiro finds her definitely not traumatized or killed! Ahaha... Ahhh, gosh. Poor papa bear. Mira's plenty capable, and able to pull herself out of potential messes, so pops probs trusted her to keep herself safe. Good tech, good training, but impossible odds are impossible I guess. Whatever happened must've been Something

Lost Rain

I rewrote that section. Thanks for the comment. I like the new version much more than the old one. Also, it was supposed to be implied that he was out of contact on a mission, so he couldn’t call or check in. It wasn’t negligence. The implication just wasn’t very clear.

lenkite

Dad seems extremely negligent to the point of full parody. Did he really send his daughter unaccompanied into a city that was being assaulted by an aether invasive entity where >1 million people died and never called his daughter in a month and a half ? WHY is he calling the MC anyways and chuckling while asking about Mira ? He should have called his daughter first and many times before this call. He should have already been in a concerned state before this call.

Arkus86

"There was always the unfortunate risk it’d blow up as soon as I got on it." Well, at least she knows hot to build the bike for maximum explosive damage?

Mark Robert Mitchell

Altitude is the word used in aviation and that relative to sea level. I think either is clear enough. If one wanted to be picky, perhaps “consistent altitude above the ground” or “consistent elevation.” But like mentioned, I think either are fine since the writer mentioned the ground.

Gardor

"Its elevation was locked, so it kept to just right above the ground" ->i cant think of a better word, or an equally clean way of saying this, but i dont think this is right way to say it. Isnt elevation kind of an absolute term, not relative to where the ground is? So like, if she flew off a cliff, maintaining her elevation would mean shes no longer "right above the ground"? Maybe "relative elevation"? Im sure theres an aeronautic term for it, or maye elevation IS the term and im just completely wrong. Thought it was based on sea level, so topographical changes in the landscape wouldnt really impact her bikes distance from the ground. This is very pedantic, no one else noticed or cares. "It's a good thing I’d been charging Fear the Reaper up" -> she does that passively by killing people, right? Shes not actively charging up fear the reaper, a charge which gets expended after use? Tyftc

W Maxwell Cassity-Guilliom

"more and more flushed out" > "more and more fleshed out" "more heavy duty then what" > "more heavy duty than what" "I could move almost as fast the thrusters could" > "I could move almost as fast as the thrusters could" "for over a month and half…" > "for over a month and a half…" I think Shiro's got the right idea, missing person case for over a month, she needs to move fast and break things. No time to slowly case a joint and build job-specific tech, just bring all her badges and guns. Might need to hire those elite mercenaries she knows from way back when if she needs more muscle.

Brian Pierce

Damn hope she's okay


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