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Outrun - Chapter 277

🕑 Added 2025-07-16 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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UnderwhelmingBird

Oof, Razorbuddy, wrong target and at an especially bad time. He didn't die, so I think that's a win for him.

reece ward

I made a *not* of the name on my phone. Do you mean note?

Josh Turple

. I can’t imagine loosing you too Losing

Lost Rain

Thank you! All of those are fixed now.

Lost Rain

That’s a good idea. Maybe when I have time to dig into another crafting part I could bring it up, but it might be a while.

Lost Rain

Thank you! Yes, it’s my first. I’ll try and keep up with Outrun, but I’ll be too busy to write much of Myth//OS

Lost Rain

I got it switched over. No idea how I managed to get the title wrong in just one chapter. Thanks for pointing it out!

Arkus86

The "Special Secretary" in this chapter was "Special Investigator" in the last. I feel that one was more fitting for the situation, as it better conveys a sense of authority in my opinion. Also, I would have expected her to ask the name of the other soldier kicked out of the range, though at least for the moment he's not relevant.

Converted

Congrats on getting published! Great chapter. Was this your first book to get picked up? Did I read that correctly as your taking this next week off?

Gardor

Oh...did the gate guard purposely send her to the head honchos office? Those directions arent THAT hard to remember, especially to get THAT wrong. Did the Lt Colonel ask to be alerted when the investigator showed up? This is suspicious, right?

Gardor

Maybe her work on her hover bike and its gravity stuff could lead to her tinkering with her drop shoots. Stuff like lowering her own gravity constantly, for mobility and to not leave a clear trail in dust. Walking on ceilings and jumping further. Even just getting back up to whatever roof she parked her bike on, there may not always be a convenient ladder. Increasing her gravity for combat probably isnt really in her wheel house, but could be situationally handy. Straight up floating could be neat too, being gravity neutral. DIY sniper's perch, although one without any cover. She's like, good at technology, right? Its not just her copying schematics she's seen, she understands enough to invent or improve things? Would be a big jump up though, maybe too big considering the mechanical limitations of the tech. Edit: chutes? Edit2: Shutes.

Gardor

"Razor Bloc’s gang colors were pretty basic all things considered. They all had razors sewed into their clothing. It was a bit weird of an aesthetic, all things considered." -> doubled up "If I find even a hair out of place, then next time I won’t miss" -> maybe she should say "ill aim higher", cuz "missing" isnt something she wants associated with her right now. Might be able to work in an emasculating dick size joke, too, depending on how big a villain she wants to be. Also, might wanna put some description of what the badge is, and how she "flashes" it. Im getting the vibe its essentially an encrypted NFT, but i still dont know how shes "showing it" to people. Congrats on the publication!


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