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Outrun - Chapter 283

🕑 Added 2025-07-30 22:04:00 +0000 UTC

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Arkeus

The issue with thousand disguises lies between the chair and the computer 😂

UnderwhelmingBird

Damn Saint was coasting on faith hardcore, trusting her not to leave him hanging. The way he casually scanned the crowd and immediately settled into the Most Appropriate Persona confounded me yet again, I'm totally with our MC on that one. It'd be like a wizard trying to sus out how the fuck a sorcerer is doing...whatever it is they're doing. Probably something absurd. 'Cues' is practice, but he just slides in their like he's got a steady supply of Social Lubricant. I wonder if there's a way to set up a 'Corvid Control Mode' on the bike. Servos and such to augment the controls, an aether-flavored control link coded to His Most Feathery Majesty Corvid's signature...there's probs something that could be adapted from existing magi-cybertech right? The mental image of a Crow riding a gravbike, wind flowing through/rustling his feathers is too good to not dream of a reality where it could be possible.

Minlett

Yeah I think she was saying All the more reason for her. After all having the info out isn't a bad thing for the main character

Gardor

"I hopped up on the concrete barricade and crossed my legs, letting the deck rest on my lap." Im trying to be better about giving compliments, just wanted to say this was a nice bit of writing. Dunno what its called, maybe "space work", but it seemed like good space work. Descriptive of the setting and the character. ”You were the lead singer for Sorrow, weren’t you?” It was a rhetorical question. Anyone in his situation would’ve realized it was a rhetorical question." -> might wanna put in an "i asked/said/wondered out loud", cuz when i first read this it took me a minute to realize this wasnt bar conversation, and i was wondering how it could be rhetorical. "I deafened my comms" ->muted, probably. Or does deafened mean hear but not talk? Doesnt seem right ""If I die, the info is set to auto release.” All the more reason to kill him." -> no it isnt? A reason for who? Its a pretty good safety blanket, imo. Unless shes saying that she wants to kill him to expose Radio Shack, which i mean, kinda makes sense but sorta seems coincidental more than anything.


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