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Outrun - Chapter 294

🕑 Added 2025-08-25 22:04:02 +0000 UTC

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UnderwhelmingBird

Growing plants for someone else gives her a reason to get used to the feeling of being around plants, or even make use of the trait to make sure the plants are living their best life. Otherwise I'm sure she'd happily spend as little time around plants as possible. Not too difficult in a concrete jungle

kreiverin

Thanks

Jack

Can't wait until Mira finds out about the kinetic power and all the other things that she's up too lol. Loving the story so far, great work.

Lost Rain

The context on that part isn’t very clear. It’s kinda hard to write several thought processes at once. It was more of an idle thought while her brain worked through all that happened back then. That being said, the rest of the time there usually is one negative one. I find it more interesting to write that way. And intrusive thoughts hit some people super hard. Someone like Mira who’s practically grown up with a gun in her hand? I figured at least part of her would be more guarded and suspicious.

Lost Rain

There were two packages of lavender

Gardor

If her halo splits her brain into five different sections, why is at least one always suspicious/negative? Shouldnt they be mostly the same? Its just five Mira's thinking at once, you'd think theyd have more commonalities than differences. Its just weird to have one think "gosh i love her so much" while another thinks "i bet she poisoned me", its not like theyre gollum and smeagol. Or maybe they are, what do i know.

Gardor

"The Mutant Hibiscus had twenty-five in the pack, and the Aethieral Lavender had only three. Total of six" -> dunno what this means, "total of six"?


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