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Outrun - Chapter 295

🕑 Added 2025-08-27 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Gardor

Occurs to me that it is NOT mental, they actually need to speak, woopsie doosie.

UnderwhelmingBird

Lmao Shiro took so long that Mira had enough time to get to the shooting range, fire all the ammo, come back/post-range gear cleaning(?), then get bored and look around, get bored OF looking around, and finally take a nap. Shiro cmon girlie you've gotta know there's not really anything to DO in the bar unless you set her up with a task. Like, I dunno, workshopping themes or setting up lists of booze or snacks. She's not as much of a tech nut you anti-social dork!!! Anyhow the missiles are an interesting thing because with her alchemical talent combined with whatever the market at large has already created, she could likely make something normally pretty mid into something fantastic. Honestly though even just an alchemical package as a rocket's payload (as its main payload, activated by a primary explosive for safety in transit) would probs be enough to hold her over for a bit. One easy example I can point to is Mandalorian "whistling birds" micro-missiles, if they packed more of a punch than for merely antipersonnel use at short range. Scale something like that up and it'd have some serious potential! Aether's pretty neat like that Casual musing got me distracted that Shiro totally could have set up a TV or something other than just Neon Lights. Cmon now, *every* bar's gotta have a TV for people to grumble over the volume/subtitles!!

kreiverin

Thanks

Gardor

I thought it was weird Shiro took Mira to the crusade apartment rather than her speakeasy, where would Shiro feel safer? Also, i think it'd be neat if when Mira used the ring it was more fucked up, because its all mental and doesnt have the filter of her physically saying it. Jumbled thoughts or something. It might fuck up their easy acceptance of the ring tho, but i think it makes sense.

Momongama

I agree, I think the character work in these chapters is the best so far

W Maxwell Cassity-Guilliom

I love these chapters a lot, you nailed making Shiro's awkward social skills endearing rather than obscuring what's actually happening. I couldn't always tell how that fox and self-enhancement magus felt or what the actual shape of their chats were through Shiro's POV.

Scholar of Endless Knowledge

Tftc!


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