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Outrun - Chapter 316

🕑 Added 2025-10-13 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

Oversight on my part. Um- give me a bit and I’ll go rewrite some parts. Might just not have her use the Blinder this arc for fear of getting friendly fired while invisible. The advantages of the Blinder are also lessened thanks to the most people in the heights lacking chrome.

Hoffman

Wait if Shrio has Blackout/Blinder on how is Saint seeing her?

Hoffman

I understand that reference

kreiverin

Thanks

Lost Rain

Love that one! Might yoink it if that’s alright

R H

“Arc angels” for the flaming halo and dropping from the sky?

UnderwhelmingBird

My first thought was to jokingly respond with a 'Solar Moon' comment Then I realized huh....that's kinda an Eclipse innit? Moon-related without *sounding* moon related, suggesting more of a duality nature than lunar shenanigans. The alternative to finding what the deal of making everything Moon-flavored is to make the allusions/references more nuanced or at least not immediately apparent, so you come back in 5-10 chapters and realize you've been Had

UnderwhelmingBird

"None of them were even close to hitting us" Neat thing about moving through a battlefield at-speed is that sometimes those 'pops' aren't even aimed at you, but the snap can make the lizard-brain part of ya twitch. Especially since she's got her Blinder and sound suppressor so combatants would have an extremely limited window to react...hard to say for sure! Whizz-snap sounds are the uh-oh noises, but ya only get that on near-misses and I doubt she'd hear it over the wind :P "We can’t name everything Moon" I laughed, way to @ yourself dear author <3

WindGunner

Just call em moon moon

Blah64

Looking forward to learning what the deal is with Polar Moon peeps making every name moon related.


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