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Outrun - Chapter 318

🕑 Added 2025-10-17 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Minlett

They were originally, but she scrapped the armor. It was too heavy and distinctive, making Stealth too hard so she turned the drop chutes into a strapped on backpack. Then she added the blackout to the backpack and and gave it all a big battery so she could manage the battery life easier.

McQuaide

If you can set up the new stories as stand alone short stories, that you can maybe come back to, I don't see why you can't publish them. Not everything has to go on in perpetuity or even be serialized.

Gardor

The drop chutes are more than just the backpack, right? I thought there were ankle and wrist thingies that she'd incorporated into her...armor?

R H

Thanks for the chapter and more myth//os!!!

Camille Vacio

Mira is gonna bed Shiro to turn into a fox to cuddle now

TheBotler

I'm fine with the notices at the end or beginning, lot of authors do it so it wouldn't bother me none

kreiverin

Thanks ) everything ok

Lost Rain

I might post some of the more unique ones, then. The ones that got close to having me fully write them, at least. I’ve got three or four of them that I really want to write out fully in the future.

Lost Rain

You’re actually pretty spot on for the tech level. 1900s, just when radios and stuff became a thing. Some TVs, though they’re rare and black and white. But it’s also a weird mixture of cybermagipunk. I dunno. I think it’ll make a cool aesthetic. And I’m, like, obsessed with the cyberpunk aesthetic as of late. One of these days I need to make something traditionally fantasy. My biggest concern is the setup for the MC. I think it’ll either make or break in the first ten or so chapters. Never got into the dice-rolling thing. I have a a close friend that writes like that, but it always feels weird to me not having control over the narrative, even if it means having some interesting narrative moments.

UnderwhelmingBird

My guess is with the flyer able to be piloted by Luna remotely, Exfil would be counted in minutes tops. Especially when you don't have to worry about meatfolk getting yeeted due to G-Force or the extra weight that comes from riders/their gear.

UnderwhelmingBird

Neat to find out what that missile platform was hehe, thanks for sharing the deets :P I was worried about Saint's stream for a little while but the bits you shared of him taking care to not ruin the Op soothed my nerves some. Tossing all the issues to Future Shiro is a swell idea since she's trying to not be a paranoid wreck of a mostly-human being. If it all goes horribly wrong then she'll deal with it when the cards fall. And on the AN!! Always love those, neat to hear yer thoughts. I'm interested to find out what the new project is, and I'll come out with a pretty niche guess.... mid-1900s era tech! Just enough for portable radios, lotta narrative wiggle room for communication to be slow OR fast based on availability of equipment :P If it's different from Myth//OS *or* Outrun...maybe a "not quite first-contact" scenario? Since there's a Protocol there's History involved..hm. You've activated the ol' thinker, I'll be interested to see watcha got in the tank when it's ready to be shared :) On Myth//OS, a smidge of decision fatigue I think was always in the cards. If you're not prepping some kind of dice-rolling guide (Era/Region/Story/Modifiers/etc) to ease the burden on yer noggin, balancing narrative pacing and delving into the (very very cool) System/Dungeon set up would be pretty tough. Not quite double the work, but probs close enough to tucker ya out. Good luck!

HikinBear

A/N's are always welcome. We're paying for the honor of being close to the Author's workflow and it's interesting to hear things like that. Re Story stubs: Actually, as a reader those might be interesting. Even if they are later abandoned. (Orphaned?)

Paul

TFTC! The author's notes are good. I like having them at the end to stay on top of where you're at so I know what to expect.

Findell

It seems a bit crazy to do a 2 man op into a active zone like that espically if they are ditching the easy way out with the flyer.

Hoffman

Too short this time around. Short as story short not Shiro short 😉 Edit: loving the story arc keep doing what you're doing. And take time off if you need it


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