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Outrun - Chapter 234

🕑 Added 2025-04-07 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

The spell makes them look like enemies. They look like cultists, not Crusaders. Everyone looks like an enemy under the spell, basically.

Gardor

Great chapter, like how shes so effective at support and doesn't have main character syndrome. At least when it comes to working as a unit with the crusade, I guess. "A call came from down the hallway, “Who are you? Why’d you help me?” I glanced up to see a Knight leaning against a barricade down the hall with a rifle trained on me. His silver armor was soaked in blood and ash, though there was no denying his affiliation. “We’re Crusade. There's an Illusion spell that makes us look like this. Just- just wait till the fight is over and we’ll talk.” Although I couldn’t see his face, I could read his body language thanks to Cues. He was extremely hesitant and wary as he slowly turned his rifle away. “Fine. I’ll watch the flank.”" Alright I don't really have any way this could be done better, and I appreciated the moment of her calling out "friendly" when the knights were about to engage the "plant monsters", but: if he was fighting cultists who looked like crusaders, he knows there's fuckery afoot. I don't know why this bit of dialogue struck me as funky, cuz again I can't see a reason she WOULDN'T spell out the illusion, it just seemed odd to me in the moment. Maybe it was body language of the rescued knight or something. Thanks for the chapter.


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