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Outrun - Chapter 239

🕑 Added 2025-04-18 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Err..find out who is the corpo who designed those bots - they were clearly mass produced before.

Gardor

"What happened to us being the good guys?" Where's this come from? Firstly, she's a thief, she shouldn't be pro-cop. Beyond that, tho, she lives in a cyberpunk super capitalist city, there's absolutely zero chance she'd be naive enough to believe that the Blue Crusade are moral protectors of the innocent. "Ocean Breeze was one of those basement-type bars that only those who know about it go to." "The Inquisitor was the first one out the door, heading up the short flight of stairs back up to the street." "As we moved up the stairs, I caught sight of our targets through the neon-lit rain." "Dev was the only one that actually listened to his order and stayed at the door, watching over the street" Alright this is just me being picky, but a basement bar should have stairs leading down to a door. So if Dev is standing by the door, he probably can't see the street or the enemies walking down it. Already I can tell I'm blowing this out of proportion. Most of the, I dunno the term, character motion or scene description makes me think my imagery is correct tho, they walk out the bar door and then up stairs, so maybe change something around.


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