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Myth//OS - Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2025-06-19 02:21:12 +0000 UTC

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Arkeus

How dare Kali look down on Pretty Cure

UnderwhelmingBird

Oho, I'll directly contradict my fellow commenter and say that it'd be difficult to nudge Aylin any meaningful amount/way/direction when she's so deeply entrenched in her suffering. Nighteye, Kali, and Pursius have all three worked, to some degree, on getting her to live instead of decay. Obvs Nighteye is a newcomer but is in a rather unique position to have a positive impact. I recognize the potential she holds in the formation of a new foundational support pillar in her life. That alone has a good bit of significance, especially since it's unlikely that she'd end up gossiping openly about her contractee's secrets.

Lost Rain

I appreciate the feedback

Orion

I'm enjoying the read so far I'm deff interested in a lot of what your setting up, but im really not a huge fan of the whole constellation aspect. I can't say for certain what bothers me but I feel like it takes me out if the story every time those parts show up. I guess it just feels unnecessary and tacked on. I'll have to see where you take it and how it fits into the story, but this is my first impression of it. Still though, aside from that, again, I am enjoying the series overall. Tyfc


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