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Outrun - Chapter 350
🕑 Added 2025-12-31 23:04:01 +0000 UTCComments
Lost Rain
Should be Crusade, and the second one hat instead of mask. I’ll fix them. As for the last part, just a bit of drifted focus on my part. I’ll get it fixed up.
kreiverin
Thanks!) Happy new year!
Gardor
Happy new years
Gardor
"The entire street was sectioned off by rusted personnel" ->think this is a typo, but "rusted" is pretty good cyberpunky slang if not "I took off my mask and slid the mask over my head" ->sorry, which mask does she wear casually? Her thieving mask? “Inquisitor Hope called ahead and said you’d be dropping by" “I almost had that bastard this time… I arrived a minute too late." ->when did Hope call, before or after the fire? Whyd she call him if he wasnt there? Why wasnt he there, if he's in charge? Whats the timeline of requesting the robo dog, calling this guy, and setting the building on fire, it seems like it all happened within fifteen minutes. Also, just a weird coincidence this guy apparently has a history with the arsonist.
Hoffman
Happy new year! Thank you for the chapter
