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Myth//OS - Chapter 68
🕑 Added 2026-02-06 06:32:35 +0000 UTCComments
TheShadowSlayer_
I think Francis is like, my second favorite character. The greeting gets me every time
Lost Rain
Actually what I had it as originally, but Bastion’s equal opportunity. I think I’ll swap back, though. It does feel a bit clunky.
Arkus86
It does feel like things are picking up. "Sir Zortro, the Knight of Knight!" -> "Knight of Night", based on the other time the name was mentioned here. "And when we are men and women are raped and disappear into labor programs" -> needs some rewording. "when our women are raped and men disappear into labor programs"?
kreiverin
Thanks))
