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Update and Poll - Beta Read

🕑 Added 2026-02-24 19:12:38 +0000 UTC

Comments

Lost Rain

Thank you for the review! I’ll put it up at some point.

Melissa Proffitt

Definitely interested in Beta for feedback purposes. For reference, here's my GR review of the first book. https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/8354860055

matt

I'm always up for beta reading.

Lost Rain

Hopefully those bones are stronger now. I’ve got, like, five more chapters to do and then I’ll put it up here probably.

LNatsu

I like the school arc, but honestly that might be more because I see it as the beginning of Mother and that elevates it in my eyes. I enjoyed all the characters but yeah it did feel kind of stitched together at times... it has good bones though!

Momongama

I also mostly liked it but I thought it kinda dragged, and the tone was all over the place

Daemion

"Do you want to read more of the awesome story I'm writing?" ... well, duh. :P I quite liked the original school arc, except it was over quickly and she never used the relationships she made there again. Or her noble identity. A bit of wasted potential, but then again Shiro is terminally busy all the time.