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Coxville Chronicles: Back 2 School (preview)
🕑 Added 2018-07-01 03:25:57 +0000 UTC This is essentially a sketch but I thought I'd share some of the process I go through trying to decide on things. I'm a firm believer that story in porn comics needs to be short and sweet and get right into the action. If I can condense that into one page I will. I tried that here and I think it works. I experiment with colors or lack of colors to serve a purpose. The dark contrasting background and clothing really make Jenny and the Dean's skin and hair pop. She's the most vibrant thing visually on the page and rightly so. Setting up panels involves not just composition for each one but leading the eye through to the next panel and out the next. I'm going to have to go back and rework some things because the creative process can be messy when you're experimenting.If you have any questions leave them in the comments. I'll get to them as I catch them.
Comments
Joshua Frisby
It's not in comic form but there is a writer who some of the earlier comics were based from and the rabies ones as well: <a href="https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Stormbringer/The%20Coxville%20Stories/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Stormbringer/The%20Coxville%20Stories/</a>
MadP
its only from getting into Rabies-t-lagomorph's work with these characters that i realized there's so much more to it than i thought.
MadP
Always interested to figure out and learn about this whole Coxville universe thing. Like who's who and all that.
Hammertyme
Wow I didn't notice, but she does look like her!
MadP
Is that the Ms. Apple at the desk? Whoa!
BBC Waifu
Great set up. I cannot wait to see it completed!
Sun1Sol
I agree, a little story never hurts
kogeikun
I quite disagree that porn comics have to go straight to the point. If we go directly to the action is not much different from current porn. "Hi, my name is Mary Slut and I like cocks. Nice to meet you Mary Slut, I have a dick. - Jony Cock says with a camera in his hand. " Doing that the only thing that differentiates a good porn comic from a bad one is the drawing and I do not think that drawing is the only important thing in a comic. If we follow that approach we do not need a story, just a series of very hot images. If anything we should learn from Japan (which from my point of view are the masters the porn comic) is that they take their time to develop the story and the characters. There are many hentai that not only serve to empty the deposit, they are even interesting to read. But that's my opinion.
Infinitive_X
Glad to see ms. Apple making a comeback hopefully soon she might be taking some cum back.....I'll let myself out
Sun1Sol
Yes! ThePit came through with a treat this time! Life is good when your patient and with Jenny's hot piece of Ass I'll take it! Plus Ms. Apple's back! How can you not be happy :)
Silent1121
fucking amazing like all your work
Arjuna Pandava
Hahaha, all good.
Pit-erotic
Sorry about that lol
Arjuna Pandava
Ah, good to know. Was straining my eyes a bit reading their discussion. Also, glad to have you back!
Pit-erotic
This is just a preview and the final image will be plenty big enough for readability. They'll also have speech bubbles.
Arjuna Pandava
For me, alot of the text is hard to read. Perhaps using either a bigger or different font would work instead?
Animeplayer
She is looking excellent! Hope the same for the secretary. For me, do want story with depth to make the sex better, well, quality in it for the set up for better foreplay.
Olulade oni
Hahaha you are on fire
