"Early Bird" page1
🕑 Added 2020-10-01 03:48:05 +0000 UTCHere's the start of Amber's short story. I've got two more pages sketched out. I think it's going to need a forth for the finish and for "Early Bird" to make sense. Let me know what you think. I'm going to add some quality dialogue when it's all done and release those together, but for now I say enjoy the art without any bubbles and words to distract. Enjoy.
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Tazrael
What a lovely public service
Re-edit
Hair dye exists.
SW
soooo we're working off gene mutation, or is it just that his hair has been lightened from the sun (you can see the roots are still dark)? Perhaps some tribal tats or a seashell necklace would better accentuate the point he's an islander, but cheers for the info haha <3
t'shiar
not really addressing the comic, but here's an article (re: dark skinned non european blonds/blondes): https://www.livescience.com/20078-gene-mutation-blond-hair.html
MeinFischer
Maybe it's one of those fancy cooling systems where there's a thin layer between the outside and inside panels and cool liquids are circulated between them.
SW
Why does he have blonde haiirrrrrrrr? :\
Tittylover
I feel like if that dick gets horizontal it aint gonna fit
MeinFischer
I don't know why but I love that this guy has sideburns.
Halaema
Awesome idea
Animeplayer
Now that's my kind of service! Hot damn, thanks for giving me lewder Ideas. But I will say this...I hope there is a AC inside, hate the idea to see fainted Bimbos in boxes.
Solarwind
TRUE
Nemecia G
Gotta say, I enjoy when you go for dudes w/ character like this one! Total hottie.
Minh Thanh Hoang
Great work instead I am still waiting for hypnos
Dmitrys
that's a very fun concept, I might try drawing something similar.
Emilio Orozco
I'm excited to see where this goes! And the dialog is gonna be the cherry on top
Hentairded
Words can not describe how excited I am
Myron Diaz
There isn't going to be much room in that box when he get hard but I'm sure Amber will find some places where it can go !! Nice job !!
Slutwriter
Looks promising. Creative premise, too!
Jonathan Bravo
Great work PIT!!!!!