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PokéSync: B3 — 37. Lori; Stir, not Shaken
PoV:1: Rhea (O_o oh no, what is with that title? Run, Rhea!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found...
UE Rewrite: B2 — 21. Raven Empress
PoV:1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------A low rumble passed through Elinor’s chest, with the thunderous heavens roaring over the polished white capital of Lumina as she entered the thumping rain. Cool liquid struck her skin, the musky scent ...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 20. And Then There Were Four
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Mom Trusting Fox Girl!)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Sora looked down at her sister, now a somewhat thin white book devoid of any defining characteristic; there was no way this was supposed to happen. “Okay, umm, Mom! ...
PokéSync: B3 — 36. The Numbers, Jason!
PoV:1: Rhea (O_o oh no, what is with that title? Run, Rhea!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found...
Rosen Flame B1 — 6. The Terror of Touch
PoV:1. Malik (Our MC and Humanity's Hero!)Rosen Flame IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Malik played with the small leather pouch in one hand while pulling Rose along with the other as he exited the bank. The doors were propped up with several guards now hired on from what see...
TO Rewrite: B1 — 36. A Hood Life
Author Note: Thank you for giving me the chance to write a backlog chapter for the editors to have a week's gap to look through it. I know Val is happy, haha! I added a few small things here and there. I moved the Jeanne portion to the end of the last chapter, as well.PoV:1. Maria (Our Unicorn h...
UE Rewrite: B2 — 20. A Rise To Infamy
Pov:1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------A curious smile lifted Elinor’s lightly tinted green lips as she stepped out of the gatehouse onto the bright, stone-block entrance of Lumina. The pattering of rain against the gleaming white surface o...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 19. A Family's Resolve
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Mom Trusting Fox Girl!)2. Wendy Moore (Our newest family addition!)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Heart stilling in her mother’s arms, Sora pulled away as her mom’s bottom lip drew in, and she glared at the wall like ...
PokéSync: B3 — 35. Flaming Skirt
PoV:1: Rhea (O_o oh no, what is with that title? Run, Rhea!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found...
TO Rewrite: B1 — 35. Holy Overdose?
Author Note: Thank you for giving me the chance to write a backlog chapter for the editors to have a week's gap to look through it. I know Val is happy, haha! I added a few small things here and there. I moved the Jeanne portion to the end of this chapter, as well.PoV:1. Maria (Our Unicorn heale...
Mari Bee Accepted The ATM Project
Overall, Mari Bee and Jon have had the best performance. I have set the date for the contract to be complete by December 10th, and they have accepted. Now, we get into the details of things. I have compiled a document of character voices in the chapters they first appear in.If there is anything you&...
ATM Narrator Choice
I've been listening to a lot of them, and there has been a lot more that have come, but still, Mari Bee seems to be the best 'overall' choice. I can send her a document with the characters and how they're supposed to sound.So, let me know what you guys think needs to be done 'rig...
UE Rewrite: B2 — 19. From Commoner to Princess
1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on Discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Elinor left the crying sisters in the care of her father as she circled the c...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 18. A Glass Heart Reforged
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our confused and frustrated fox girl discovers the truth!)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Sora held Kari, helping her through the panic attack of seeing her monstrous brother. Memories of her time trembling in the bathroom cam...
ATM Audible Audition 11 - Kelly McGaw
Let me know what you think about each of the auditions I've gotten thus far. Note that I can work with them to change pacing or emotion or other areas of critique.
ATM Audible Audition 10 - Melissa Connell
Let me know what you think about each of the auditions I've gotten thus far. Note that I can work with them to change pacing or emotion or other areas of critique.A new audition that seems to show some promise.
PokéSync: B3 — 34. The Art of Comforting
PoV:1: Rhea (You know how our sunny girl is, never wanting to put pressure on people)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it'...
Narrator Auditions for ATM Poll
I wish I could have added a ton of audio tracks on a single post, but Patreon doesn't have that option. So, I had to post all the auditions below for you to listen to. Please select the best ones you like thus far. I've gotten over 70 auditions in the past two days after posting it, and thes...
ATM Audible Audition 09 - Katie Hagaman
Let me know what you think about each of the auditions I've gotten thus far. Note that I can work with them to change pacing or emotion or other areas of critique.
ATM Audible Audition 08 - Rylee Kuberra
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ATM Audible Audition 07 - Warren Brownley
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ATM Audible Audition 06 - Kira Omans (Updated)
Let me know what you think about each of the auditions I've gotten thus far. Note that I can work with them to change pacing or emotion or other areas of critique.Author Note: Kira recorded more samples from different parts of the book. The old sample of Chapter 4 is attached below to download a...
ATM Audible Audition 05 - Erika Calvert (Updated)
Let me know what you think about each of the auditions I've gotten thus far. Note that I can work with them to change pacing or emotion or other areas of critique.Author Note: Erika added onto the end new samples for different scenes.
ATM Audible Audition 04 - Anthony Ray Morales
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ATM Audible Audition 03 - Alice Dodd
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ATM Audible Audition 02 - C.J. McAllister
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ATM Audible Audition 01 - Mari Bee (Updated)
Let me know what you think about each of the auditions I've gotten thus far. Note that I can work with them to change pacing or emotion or other areas of critique.Author Note: I know a lot of people like Mari Bee. This is a full narration of the new script, which is fairly long; it is good to se...
TO Rewrite: B1 — 34. Night's End
Author Edit: I added Rachel's level, the proper Legend that showed up with the UK I intended, and changed Veronica's part since she did come off as a bit of a non-threat before, with certain weaknesses triggering her and some editor fixes.PoV:1. Rachel (Our girl in black!)2. Scarlet (Our fan...
Rosen Flame B1 — 5. Robbers?
PoV:1. Malik (Our MC and Humanity's Hero!)Rosen Flame IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Trying not to panic at what rumors might be spreading after their encounter with Ena, the vomiting wood elf down the hall, or this courtship pact he’d made with a demigod, Malik tried not...
UE Rewrite: B2 — 18. A New Monarch is Born
1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on Discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Elinor watched her father go through the golden cut in space first, following...
