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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 5. What Friends Do
Author Note: I reworked Mary and Sora's part at the end to make Mary more critical of Sora's invasion of privacy. It shows that Mary is still trying to help see Sora's behavior and how it could cause trouble in a social setting with other people, including Wendy.PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Pr...
Dad Is Through Surgery: Successful :)
I’m in the hospital with him right now. He’s got a big neck brace on. What does he ask the moment I get in? lol. Hey, Scott, can I have some sippage? Basically his way of asking me to help him drink some soda, haha. He is doing well.The surgery and cause is below:1. Reason for the treatmen...
PokéSync: B4 — 8. Slugfest
PoV:1: Maya (Our Steely Girl Looking For A Win!)2: Rhea Everhart (Our Blonde Bombshell Future Supervillain!)3: Nova (Our Star and Fluffy Fashion Queen!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different; some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been ...
Thank You 4 The Break!
I just wanted to thank all of you for the 6 days to rest and think. 🤔 I think this is the first time in over 4 years where I didn’t write anything for so long. I look forward to kicking up the process again on Tuesday with Pokesync.o7
Dad’s Medical Issue Solved :)
over the past few months my dad has been getting worse and worse. He’s been unable to walk without terrible limps and falling over, which makes him hit his head while trying to take a shower or falling on the toilet. He has no strength at all in his body and terrible pain.He has been in the VA hos...
1 Week Off Reminder
I'll be resuming my normal release schedule on the 2nd of Jan MST with Pokesync, followed by A Tail's Misfortune Thursday, Undying Empire Friday, and The Oscillation Sunday. Thank you for your patience. o7Side Note: ATM Audiobook. I only just recently got through the full audiobook and am co...
TO Rewrite: B2 — 6. Highs And Lows
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)2. Scarlet (Our Little Fang!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Rachel opened her eyes, ears twitching as DC’s nighttime life pricked her brain; she felt surprisingly spiritually rejuvenated by the internal experience—probably some...
UE Rewrite: B2 — 32. Dance, Dance, Little Flies
PoV:1. Anala (Youngest daughter of the Great House of Tarkov!)2. Elinor (Our Evolved Undead Spooder Warlord!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Spots danced across Anala’s vision as she tried to keep herself up, gasping for air, hand gingerly pressing against her bruised...
Update On Holiday Chapter Schedule - 1 Week Break
Undying Empire: Changed to tomorrow night.I planned on releasing it today, but I got wound up with other things for the holidays and also decided it would be much cooler from Anala's POV than Elinor's since we get to see our Empress' new gains from someone else's POV.The Oscillation:...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 4. A Mother's Failing
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Sora didn’t move to a seat as she appraised the waiting pair, Wendy and Fen behind her. All of the magical items and constant humming weaves of otherworldly forces pul...
PokéSync: B4 — 7. The Rookie Crusher
PoV:1: Rhea Everhart (Our Bombshell Blonde!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different; some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been mislabeled, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexPrevious Ch...
TO Rewrite: B2 — 5. A Shocking Partnership
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------Taking the comfortable and extravagant chair Mei had created, Rachel crossed her legs and glanced between the two powerful entities as a wave of pressure made her dizzy. The elegant moon bunny’s sof...
UE Rewrite: B2 — 31. A Disappointing Start
Author Note: Val and I are having to go over a few details regarding Elinor's Equipable Feats since... she should have more. I was going through the System Sheet when doing this chapter, which was why this one took longer than usual and saw a few inconsistencies that I'm ironing out with Val...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 3. Mending Bridges
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Not knowing what she’d say or do, Sora exited the creepy room the organization had created for Wendy, leaving her best friend to figure out her wardrobe. She bet the b...
ATM Rewrite Update
Tomorrow, I'll write the 3rd chapter! I've been really busy going over the audiobook, looking for errors to send Mari to correct. I'm on about Chapter 20 (out of 42) right now. I'm trying to give more time to get the chapters up. Thanks for your patience! o7
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 2. A Mother’s Resolution
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Goosebumps prickled Sora’s arms at her mother’s voice, the flaming goddess of vulpes giving her a wave that made her want to cry and laugh at the same time. She almo...
PokéSync: B4 — 6. Worth The Fight
Author Note: I think how I want to do this is having one (or two at most) SoL chapters between Gyms to space out the battles and also introduce some fun things, resolve some background things, and have a breather for some cute things.PoV:1: Rhea (Our Bombshell Blonde!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For V...
In 40 Min: ATM Audiobook In Discord Ch. 5-10
Update: I went through chapters 1-4 yesterday. For those who want to follow through and give their opinions as I look for errors and things to give Mari to fix, then you're free to join! I'll be listening to 5-10 or about 2 hours and 30 minutes. Join here:https://discord.gg/QS9GyXBGZP
TO Rewrite: B2 — 4. A Bunny's Perseverance
PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterIn-line Edit--------------------In the process of boosting Galahad’s natural defenses with the Ichor infused into her blood, Rachel spent ninety minutes overlooking her Feats and what upgrades she’d gained since her change.She w...
ATM Volume 1 Audiobook Audio Approval
I just got back the audiobook for approval from Mari Bee. You can see the length in the image below. All I need to do now is approve the product, which means I need to review the full book and make sure everything is sound! We're getting closer to release!
UE Rewrite: B2 — 30. Path of the Warlord
PoV:1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Taking a step toward the statue of the former queen, Elinor’s flame-embraced hand paused inches away as a male voice filled the stadium, drawing her gaze up to Grand Duke Logan, standing beside her fat...
Old ATM Volume 2 Draft
ATM Rewrite Index--------------------------Old Volume 2 Draft--------------------------B2 — 28. Breaking BoundariesB2 — 27. Game On!B2 — 26. FreedomB2 — 25. A Book, Crown, or Scepter?B2 — 24. Stranger TherapyB2 — 23. How To Kill A HaremB2 — 22. Rolling StoneB2 — 21. Sailor Fluffy Tai...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 1. A Dream on the Moon
PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)ATM Rewrite IndexGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------A gentle pulse of power filled Sora’s mind as she surfaced from a flaming sea, flashes of memories streaking through scenes of her time transforming, Kari’s bullying, and the events...
ATM Volume 2, Major Update
First and foremost: Mari Bee should be finished with the Audiobook of Volume 1 in two days! Exciting! I will need to go over it and make sure that it is all up to snuff before releasing it, and all of you will hear about it first!tl:dr: I LOVE Volume 1 of ATM, but I have not been happy with the way ...
PokéSync: B4 — 5. The Fanclub President
Author Note: I want to do all of the Gym Battles with the girls, but that would be WAY WAY too long and be too many battles back-to-back between their rush to each Gym. So, I'll mainly do the key ones that are important to the specific girl at each Gym (excluding Giovanni, of course, which will ...
TO Rewrite: B2 — 3. Soul Vulnerability
Author Note: I went through with Val and edited the chapter; Val has been busy with parenting stuff, so they've been unable to get to some of the last few chapters. Just some clarifications of things and grammar stuff.PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Recovering Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious Chapte...
ATM Vol. 1 Audiobook Reminder
Next Saturday is the contract date that the audiobook is set to be completed. Well, then I'll need to verify it is all good, but I'll keep you updated!
UE Rewrite: B3 — 6. Path to Evolution; Level 20
PoV:1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)Undying Empire IndexPrevious ChapterInline Edits--------------Stepping through the parted stream of liquid in the king’s makeshift war chamber, Elinor went to the balcony to join the grand duke and her father. King Virelli floated next to her to stare across the ...
ATM Rewrite: B2 — 28. Breaking Boundaries
Author Note: I made a few edits to make it flow better, mainly in Wendy's section. O_o ominous stuff, but is it good or bad... or maybe both?PoV:1. Sora Moore (Our Main (Side) Protagonist Fox Girl in an Otome Game!)2. Wendy Moore (Our Brunette Fox with Stability Problems!)ATM Rewrite IndexPrevio...
PokéSync: B4 — 4. An Unconventional Victory
PoV:1: Gables (Our Smooth Frog Boi!)2: Lori (Our Unovan Girl Overcoming Trauma!)3: Zyra (Lt. Flutter in the coop!)4: Gables (Our fight goes on with a surprise!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different; some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes ha...
