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Narration Changes?
So, I was thinking about changing up how some of the narration is done in the novel. For example, if someone were to present you with an item, I would use internal dialog with him speaking of obtaining said item. For example..You - "Oh, he handed me some money."Instead, I was thinking about ...
Meet Spencer
Here we have Spencer Caldon, one member of the tennis team. This husky has been your friend for a while now, and he's known for being good at pretty much everything he does. But who knows, maybe this guy has something hidden about him that even his closest friends don't know?
Meet the Coach
Here's one of the characters from the novel you guys will get to interact with. This is the coach of the team, Harold Grifter. Ever daydream in school about finding yourself alone in the locker room with your coach, fresh from the shower? I know I did, and that's part of the inspiration behi...
Alright!
So, it seems someone found my page, so I went ahead and added the first demo to the home page. Or here (https://www.dropbox.com/s/ijuaynba1b4z407/ExtracuricularActivities-1.0-all.zip?dl=0).I still have revising to do to dialog, and I'm sure it's prolly broken somewhere, so feel free to leave...
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